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Magnificent Beings Of The Sea

Under the sea foam and skipping on waves while holding those regal heads up high; their beauty is pure and their magic draws raves into the deep under moonlit sky. Many a ship filled with sailors and such had witnessed the mystery of their dark eyes. Some even swore they had felt a cold touch, had stood stock still and become mesmerized. Womanly body and tail of a fish were what they remembered when telling their story. Some even were granted their every last wish; some quite overcome by tumultuous glory. Those tales through the years grew from timid to strong as men of all sorts recounted their fate; meeting beautiful creatures who burst into song and gathered at a most alarming rate. You may doubt these tales but just watch the deep sea and wonderment will surely fascinate you. As waves overtake you you're suddenly free; some glorious being sails you through the blue.

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Date: 8/17/2014 10:33:00 PM
Deb, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:05:00 PM
I like this one very much! Congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 7/25/2014 8:47:00 PM
A magnificent tale and a magnificent poem!
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:46:00 AM
You are a wonderful storyteller! I was so drawn into this enchanting tale that I didn't want it to end! Great rhyming in this poem, also!.... Is this for the mermaid contest? If so, I wish you the best of luck, Deb!
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Date: 6/14/2014 3:12:00 PM
Magical, what would the sea be without it's mysteries.
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Date: 6/14/2014 5:44:00 AM
An incredible write my dear friend Deb with splendid image. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing. Thanks a lot as well for your warm congratulatory comments on my poem. More blessings! love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/11/2014 7:43:00 PM
Mermaids are truly an amazing myth and legends the whole idea of these amazing creatures or being is wondrous in my opinion. Love your inspirational work on this subject. cheri
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Date: 6/11/2014 10:29:00 AM
real masterful piece Deb, so full of great imagery and lovely rhyme, well done, God bless, Gordon
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:31:00 AM
- Deb, I love it .... really a amazing poem !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:02:00 PM
What a beauty about the mermaid ....wonderful Tim
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