Magnificent Beings of the Sea

Under the sea foam and skipping on waves
while holding those regal heads up high;
their beauty is pure and their magic draws raves
into the deep under moonlit sky.

Many a ship filled with sailors and such
had witnessed the mystery of their dark eyes.
Some even swore they had felt a cold touch,
had stood stock still and become mesmerized.

Womanly body and tail of a fish
were what they remembered when telling their story.
Some even were granted their every last wish;
some quite overcome by tumultuous glory.

Those tales through the years grew from timid to strong
as men of all sorts recounted their fate;
meeting beautiful creatures who burst into song
and gathered at a most alarming rate.

You may doubt these tales but just watch the deep sea
and wonderment will surely fascinate you.
As waves overtake you you're suddenly free;
some glorious being sails you through the blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Deb, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
Lindley Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:05 PM
I like this one very much! Congrats on your win!!!
Vaso Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 8:47 PM
A magnificent tale and a magnificent poem!
Deschler Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 1:46 AM
You are a wonderful storyteller! I was so drawn into this enchanting tale that I didn't want it to end! Great rhyming in this poem, also!.... Is this for the mermaid contest? If so, I wish you the best of luck, Deb!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Magical, what would the sea be without it's mysteries.
Gasun Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 5:44 AM
An incredible write my dear friend Deb with splendid image. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you so much for sharing. Thanks a lot as well for your warm congratulatory comments on my poem. More blessings! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Dunn Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Mermaids are truly an amazing myth and legends the whole idea of these amazing creatures or being is wondrous in my opinion. Love your inspirational work on this subject. cheri
Mcconnell Avatar
June 11, 2014 at 10:29 AM
real masterful piece Deb, so full of great imagery and lovely rhyme, well done, God bless, Gordon
Andresen Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:31 AM
- Deb, I love it .... really a amazing poem !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 9:02 PM
What a beauty about the mermaid ....wonderful Tim
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace