Shadow Hamilton Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Magnet

There is a gigantic magnet
somewhere far out in deepest space
that holds the planets in their place
sun and moon too, do rise and set. 

All controlled by this magnet
that makes the moon govern the tides
whilst stars do whisper in asides
of this and that caught in its jet.

Yet who controls it, this magnet?
for that one must read the book
and not just skimp but really look
read every word and heaven get.

Our life of free will is governed
by vast things beyond our knowledge
all courses pre-set by a hedge
that path of god to us is wed.

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Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2015 at 3:56 PM this is a very good philosophical type poem Shadow! I am glad I thought to come back and search for a recent one of yours I had not seen!

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2015 at 4:53 PM You know, it's quite believable that there's a huge magnet out there. A beautifully penned sentiment.

Jack Horne February 3, 2015 at 3:15 PM very touching write indeed Shadow Hamilton February 3, 2015 at 5:43 PM ty Jack appreciated hugs

Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 6:18 PM deep touching beautiful pen linda dear friend bless you Shadow Hamilton February 3, 2015 at 5:42 PM dearest Liam ty my friend hugs

Thabang Ngoma February 1, 2015 at 4:55 AM Hi Shadow...this piece really moved me. I love the powerful message, the beautiful form used...thank you for sharing such profound insights...rgds, 7habang Shadow Hamilton February 1, 2015 at 5:37 PM ty Thabang appreciated hugs