Phyllis Babcock Poet Rhyme

Magical Nature

In beauty of nature we find His unique design
A magical formation that defies time.

Endless blue skies to the ocean's depths
Wonderful scenes that take our breath.

The sun rising fast where darkness turns to light
Or a sleeping world in the darkness of night.

It has a beauty like a real jewel
But at times can be callous and cruel.

In beauty of nature we find His unique design
A magical formation for all time.

10/16/12

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John Loving Iii October 17, 2012 at 4:56 PM yes this is nice but it would be nicer if you take out the word gem before jewel. it seems repetative.

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2012 at 2:11 PM Phyllis, this has a lovely pattern to it. I enjoyed seeing this new poem of yours. Hmmm, I don't understand this virus thing you saw. I am having no problems with my computer now. MY husband's was the one badly infected. I am doing lots of soupmails with people. I know people are having problems right now with soupmail here. Good luck with it. LUv, andrea

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2012 at 2:34 AM A very real lovely poem Phyllis! A jewel created by you. :) - Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Rachel St.Cross October 16, 2012 at 11:26 PM ‡ Good Evening, Precious Beautiful Phyllis. I Do Know Why But This Beautiful Poem Seemed Much Longer As It Hovered Afore My Eyes ? Twas Like A Slow Motions Moment While I Read ? Definitely Something Rare Unto My Heart Since Joining PoetrySoup. I Shall Favour Its Splendours Not Because Of The Afore Mentioned Yet Simply Because Of Its Layers In Beauty. Happy Was Your Visit, Thank You. Sweet Dreams. My Love, Rachel ‡