Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Magical Moonlit Garden

Deep at the bottom of my garden
I have witnessed an amazing sight
Fairies, gnomes and pixies
Having a party in the moonlight

They are magical little creatures
Dancing around sleeping flowers
It’s a breathtaking sight if you see them
I'm enchanted by their antics for hours

But the second the sun begins to rise
and sunshine rays break at dawn
These little people just disappear
Not a trace of them left on the lawn!

Little People Contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton
06~20~16

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Lewis Raynes July 12, 2016 at 6:28 PM Beautiful little write Jan, :)

Louis Borgo June 27, 2016 at 4:58 PM Nice title and great write, Louis.

Pashang Salehi June 27, 2016 at 9:28 AM Very cute.... Look again you might find them....good luck

Skat A June 24, 2016 at 6:40 AM Good luck Jan.... Skat Jan Allison June 25, 2016 at 7:29 PM Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray June 22, 2016 at 6:23 PM Lovely Jan. I wish we really could see them. Jan Allison June 25, 2016 at 7:29 PM Thanks jean -after a few glasses of Guinness and you probably will lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight June 21, 2016 at 9:43 AM Very cute, Jan, and you used the words so well! I am sure this will do very well in the contest! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison June 22, 2016 at 3:28 PM Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Jesse Day June 21, 2016 at 8:38 AM Making fantasy seem real - nicely written! - jesse Jan Allison June 22, 2016 at 3:29 PM Thanks Jesse:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis June 21, 2016 at 2:13 AM Fantastic and beautiful poem as the flowers are dear, Jan. Tonight I will stay up all night in my roof garden for to enjoy this sight. A seven and fav. Enjoyed it! Jan Allison June 22, 2016 at 3:30 PM Oh I hope you share some magical moments on your roof garden:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso June 20, 2016 at 8:48 PM Reminds me of the little ones, beautiful poem! Jan Allison June 21, 2016 at 1:10 AM Thanks Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper June 20, 2016 at 6:32 PM Beautiful, Jan, wonderful flow. Good luck in the contest Jan Allison June 21, 2016 at 1:10 AM It still needs work Eve:-( hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith June 20, 2016 at 5:45 PM I have the squirrels, rabbits, and the occasional opossum eating up my garden at night....trade?? Jan Allison June 21, 2016 at 1:09 AM LOL we only have rabbits here never seen one in my garden they live in the fields - opossum - sounds interesting - will swap for the slugs that decimate my plants lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 20, 2016 at 2:25 PM - A lovely poem with sweet magic in your garden, Jan :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison June 20, 2016 at 3:04 PM Thanks as ever my sunshine friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish June 20, 2016 at 2:02 PM Nice fantasy poem here. Ah. the dreams at nighttime! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Jan Allison June 20, 2016 at 3:04 PM Thanks Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx