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Magical Mime

The moon and the stars bide their time Mute mimics in Mother Nature's mime The sun shines brighter as they watch Hoping their light will go up a notch The woods look inviting, shaded and green Birds twitter happily behind the scene Animals prowl about in a hunter's game Near the roaring river in a picturesque frame Weeping willow waves in weary wistfulness As shaggy shadows shift into shapelessness The sun has set, now time has arrived For the moon and the stars to get revived They cast their glow on a sleepy world Brightening the black blanketed dreamworld 10.18.2020 For "Collaboration with the Silent One" contest

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Date: 10/22/2020 11:12:00 PM
Love this nature poem Jo. All the alliteration is great, but I especially enjoyed the fifth couplet. Congratulations for a first place win!
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Date: 10/22/2020 10:40:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jo
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Date: 10/21/2020 11:17:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS Daniel to win TOP. Blessing
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:59:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 10/21/2020 6:09:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/21/2020 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations Jo on your first place win. Love your "shaggy shadows," "black blanketed word," and the river in a "picturesque." You set the sunset scene beautifully.
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Date: 10/21/2020 12:49:00 PM
I loved your poem, especially the second line... it flows so well and is a great reply to my poem.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 10/19/2020 7:30:00 AM
- Beautiful ... luck in the contest, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/19/2020 6:20:00 AM
Beautiful images of eventide--splendidly done, Jo.
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Date: 10/18/2020 10:57:00 PM
An alliterate and inspired poem. Should do well in the contest. ~~
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Date: 10/18/2020 1:40:00 PM
Lovely writing... A poetic reflective thoughtful poem that enchants and soars through the whispers of silence that beckon to our spirits. Beautiful and inspiring. God bless you
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Date: 10/18/2020 10:54:00 AM
Jo, your words flow in perfect harmony with Silent one's verse. Good luck in the contest. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/18/2020 7:27:00 AM
Well done...completely enjoyed it...
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