Magical Experience

MAGICAL  EXPERIENCE (EL)

Gleaming rain drops from the sky
Glides over blooms with a sigh
Blushes , twirls and whirls in joy
Smitten with love, nature's ploy
Bliss  resonates  on the earth
Wafts over rivers in mirth
Gleaming rain drops from the sky.

                       
SECOND PLACE

Dated: 07.07.2021
CONTEST: ELEMENTAL POETRY
SPONSOR : CHARLES MESSINA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 7:36 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. It is very descriptive and creative way to use couplets. Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Pant Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 1:12 AM
Thank you sooo much, Sara.......Not well for the past one month....so not in touch with poetry soup..but you guys always inspire me to write....Thanks once again...
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day with your win...............
Pant Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 2:34 AM
Thank you sooo much, Paula.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Pant Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Thank you so much, Rama.
Messina Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:36 AM
Very nicely written, Bhawana...Congratulations on a fine win! Charlie
Pant Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Thank you so much Charles. Blessed.
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 4:35 AM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!
Pant Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 9:53 AM
Thank you so much, Alex. Blessed.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 11:38 AM
A magical write just like the rain drops from the sky. Have a blessed day................
Pant Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 2:24 AM
Thank you so much ,Paula.
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