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Magical Experience

MAGICAL EXPERIENCE (EL) Gleaming rain drops from the sky Glides over blooms with a sigh Blushes , twirls and whirls in joy Smitten with love, nature's ploy Bliss resonates on the earth Wafts over rivers in mirth Gleaming rain drops from the sky. SECOND PLACE Dated: 07.07.2021 CONTEST: ELEMENTAL POETRY SPONSOR : CHARLES MESSINA

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Date: 9/22/2021 7:36:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. It is very descriptive and creative way to use couplets. Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Bhawana Pant
Date: 10/8/2021 1:12:00 AM
Thank you sooo much, Sara.......Not well for the past one month....so not in touch with poetry soup..but you guys always inspire me to write....Thanks once again...
Date: 8/1/2021 11:30:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Bhawana Pant
Date: 8/2/2021 2:34:00 AM
Thank you sooo much, Paula.
Date: 7/31/2021 11:29:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Bhawana Pant
Date: 8/1/2021 7:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rama.
Date: 7/31/2021 5:36:00 AM
Very nicely written, Bhawana...Congratulations on a fine win! Charlie
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Bhawana Pant
Date: 7/31/2021 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Charles. Blessed.
Date: 7/31/2021 4:35:00 AM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!
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Bhawana Pant
Date: 7/31/2021 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alex. Blessed.
Date: 7/21/2021 11:38:00 AM
A magical write just like the rain drops from the sky. Have a blessed day................
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Bhawana Pant
Date: 7/22/2021 2:24:00 AM
Thank you so much ,Paula.

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