MAGICAL CLOUDS


White cotton clouds, 
Drifting, softly by, 
Sailing above the trees, 
Way up in the sky.
The sun slowly fades away, 
As the day changes,  from morning till night, 
The clouds start to disappear, 
Only briefly,  they stay. 
Clouds are moments of magic, 
And dreams they send our way!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Such a lovely way to describe clouds and the way they make us feel!
Hind Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 3:53 PM
Lovely!! Clouds are dreamy like you write :)
Meadows Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 11:56 PM
Thank you! Have a lovely weekend!
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 4:32 AM
Ahhh!! I like this one, Daisy. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Meadows Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 7:57 AM
Appreciate your comments, Sara and thanks for reading my posts.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:47 PM
I often imagine riding on a cloud...how captivating and 'real' your poem seems to me.
Meadows Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Sara. Glad you like the poem.
Messina Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 3:22 PM
As the leprechaun would say- "Magically Delicious" Very nice, Daisy!
Meadows Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, glad you liked the poem.
Roper Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Beautiful way to describe the day and night. Looking at their Change and movement is fascinating. Enjoyed reading your poem.
Meadows Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 8:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!. Glad you like the poem.
Sharma Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 7:31 AM
The words indeed transport the reader to the other world of clouds!
Meadows Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 8:09 AM
Thank you for reading my posts. It is so nice to watch the clouds!
Sands Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 1:16 PM
A beautiful, peaceful poem. I enjoy looking at the clouds and sky :)
Meadows Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 8:11 AM
Thank you for your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem!
Agustin Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 8:59 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Meadows Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 8:12 AM
Thank you for your kind comments and for reading my posts. Have a lovely day.
Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 10:26 AM
You've expanded the heavenly beauty of clouds in your poem. Clouds are the mythical animals in our sky.
Meadows Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much! They are so beautiful to see. Have a lovely day!
Mcconnell Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Lovely penning Daisy, with nice rhyme and flow,. Hope you're enjoying life here on PS, nice to meet a fellow Brit here, I'm North of the border. Take care and hope to read more gems from you soon, Gordon
Meadows Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 2:07 AM
Thank you. Yes, Enjoy being on Poetry Soup. There are so many talented writers. It nice to read other people's work. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.
Gauthier Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 7:18 AM
sweet ~ delightful
Meadows Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Thank you!
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September 28, 2025 at 6:40 AM
Aww how very beautiful Daisy! Your poem has such a magical calming feel to it! Debx
Meadows Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 8:02 AM
Thank you, Deb, for your kind comments. Glad you like the poem.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 4:47 PM
you've truly captured the magical, whimsical feel of clouds. Hubby and I enjoy cloud watching. Nicely penned, Daisy.
Meadows Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 10:26 AM
That's lovely, Sara. A magical moment together! Have a lovely weekend!!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 12:47 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "MAGICAL CLOUDS" write. You painted a petty picture with your words. Have a blessed day writing away..........
Meadows Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Glad you enjoyed reading the magical clouds!! They are lovely to see! Have a lovely weekend, Paula!
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