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Written: November 11, 2023 "Everywhere we look, complex magic of nature blazes before our eyes". Quote by Vincent Van Gogh Fragmented form created by Poetess Constance la France
_______________________________________ A breeze kissed trees, laying in a bucolic trance, Whilst a sunny curtain hived from prying eyes. Praising comely love, sparrows spurred stance, In a cynosure spotlight of vivid crimson skies. Leaves rustled and wiggled in a dulcet tone, An elixir, as magical as jade rolls, is shown. The lake sighed as he saw him flush alone, Swans scantly snuffed the spur to stare. As they hear the news, the skies are aware, Happiness spilled in furtive floods of dare. Fetching flowers fiercely feast with a glance, Soothing the forlorn grass as it flops in size. For them, butterflies burst busily into the zone, To quell their anguish, blot out the blare.

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Date: 11/16/2023 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. I loved your "Magical" write/picture. A great title for a great write. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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Date: 11/15/2023 10:15:00 PM
Simply charming. Just MAGICAL. Big Congrats to win on your wonderful poem. Have Great Days.
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Date: 11/12/2023 9:09:00 AM
Your poem is magical Lasaad - your words and phrases are beyond imagination and traverse poetry of bygone years yet herald the sound of great talent depicted in all your present-day poems - for example - 'Leaves rustled and wiggled in a dulcet tone, An elixir, as magical as jade rolls, is shown.' Be well Lasaad and keep your platinum pen rolling. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/12/2023 3:24:00 AM
Dear Sotto, i can hear and feel the dulcet tones youve delivered with such descriptive lines using colors and nature to paint such a magically moving and ethereal ambience, the way you weave imagery is always so awe inspiring and so profound! I loved the flow of this poem and also how you’ve written “ The lake sighed as he saw him flush alone,Swans scantly snuffed the spur to stare.” So surreal and stunning! Absolutely loved reading this one! Im sure this will do very well in the contest too.
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Date: 11/11/2023 3:25:00 PM
Wonderful, magical poetry Sotto, “A breeze kissed trees” love those words and the whole poem too, it’s a poetic beauty. If for Constance’s contest then all the best… Belle
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Date: 11/11/2023 1:33:00 PM
dearest Sotto--a magnificent poem filled with so many lovely images that create such a magical air. I felt like I was floating on nature's breeze viewing the skies, the trees, the rustling leaves, etc. So many beautiful lines, but I especially liked "breeze kissed trees" and "fetching flowers fiercely feast with a glance." Despite the 'fragmented' form, your poem flowed so easily. Such a pleasant read. Best wishes with the contest; have a great weekend, your poetess friend, Sara
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