Magic Beans

As I wander in the wilderness dark and dreary stumbling into an empty space with brightness rendering me blind i sight a huge beanstalk with just a single pod hanging out for me only four beans within Confused, i wonder at its sight and unsure what it implies are they mere beans or magical as that of Jack's am i part of a modern fairytale with wishes and curses entailed I contemplate on its use and then i was knocked out of my reverie They were indeed magic beans which is alive within us the wonderful emotions Almighty has provided us HAPPINESS that is to be discovered and enduring the SAD times controlling our ANGER and FEAR to be overcome These beans decide the path and is to be reined for they are the magic beans that will pave your way until the reins are in your hands You succeed and is blessed. © Nadiya (14 Jan '15) *Won 6th place on 14 Feb 2015 in the contest 'Magic Beans' by Poet Destroyer
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Belcher Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations on your win Poesy with this very lovely poem!
Relish Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:41 PM
Thank you very much Ed
A  Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Poesy, CONGRATULATIONS! A sweet Magic bean Win*** Love **SKAT
Relish Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 2:20 AM
Thank you skat..lov
Allison Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 1:24 PM
A Lovely write Nadiya many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Relish Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 1:33 PM
thank you dear poetess.. love, nad!
A   Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 2:58 AM
Poesy, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog or poem "50 shades of what?" if you'd like. Wishing you a Happy Valentine's Day, thank you for the Magic Beans Poem -Always & Forever- LINDA
Relish Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 3:10 AM
Thank you very much Linda for a topic that had my creative juice flowing.. lov nad!
Laurie Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Hello Nadiya... Your poem flowed beautifully Nadiya. I'm impressed with how you transformed the magic beans into the path of life. Regards - Lindsay
Relish Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 5:26 AM
Hi dear... thank you very much for the visit and reading my poems... appreciate your encouraging words... nad!
Belcher Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 2:49 PM
This is a great poem Nadiya. You are very talented. Good luck in the contest, I think you have the winner!
Relish Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Thank you Ed for dropping by and for the encouraging comment... God bless
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January 15, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Nadiya so blessed you are by your muse. You are the winner. It is a winner's poem.>>>rajat
Relish Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Thank you rajat for your praising comment... pleased that you checked out my poems...
Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 2:56 AM
- Dear Nadiya, a very lovely poem - Luck in contest ! - // Anne-Lise :)
Relish Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 6:12 AM
Thank u Anne... Blessings.
Roper Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Beutiful write, Nadiya, 7 good luck in the contest. Blessing eve
Relish Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Thank you Eve... hugs nadiya
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