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Summer darkness swells like warm silk filling my rooms light plays shadow games

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/18/2017 1:14:00 PM
Indeed a magic show
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Date: 1/31/2017 4:36:00 PM
Nice descriptive flow ushering in,,,,, Magic. Enjoyed it Elizabeth. My best, chuck
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Date: 7/8/2016 8:12:00 AM
Great poem
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Date: 6/26/2016 9:44:00 PM
You did well in using this Asian form. Nice summer poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/25/2016 1:57:00 PM
wow this is really good. I agree with you, the shorter poems are a lot harder! Very well done!
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Elizabeth Babb
Date: 5/25/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thanks. I adore haiku.
Date: 3/24/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thanks, everyone. I really enjoy haiku - I find the strict format challenging...you have to express so much with so little.
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Date: 3/24/2016 8:11:00 PM
awesome Haiku, Elizabeth. Linda
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