Magic

Summer darkness swells
like warm silk filling my rooms
light plays shadow games
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Indeed a magic show
Melugin Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Nice descriptive flow ushering in,,,,, Magic. Enjoyed it Elizabeth. My best, chuck
Baucum Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Great poem
Anish Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 9:44 PM
You did well in using this Asian form. Nice summer poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Teagan Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 1:57 PM
wow this is really good. I agree with you, the shorter poems are a lot harder! Very well done!
Babb Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thanks. I adore haiku.
Babb Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Thanks, everyone. I really enjoy haiku - I find the strict format challenging...you have to express so much with so little.
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March 24, 2016 at 8:11 PM
awesome Haiku, Elizabeth. Linda
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