Magic

Talking with you was so therapeutic It erases all my pains and worries like magic Sitting beside you was truly ecstatic It makes me feel like a genius at the same time lunatic The moment you left I felt sad Not seeing you for a long time makes me mad I honestly don't know what to do My heart is demanding only you Please tell me girl something promising That I have a chance to be your darling I don't care if its true or just a lie I need to hear it from you or I will die Yes I admit I'm just a fool For you alone I'll risk it all Finding you finally makes me glad Because I'm sure with you I'm in love By : Jun Abines

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Aiyah Torres

Date: 9/7/2014 11:14:00 PM

Hi Jun... glad to see you posting here in the most famous poetry site... your poem is really fascinating... each lines soothing in my veins... very well crafted!! ..keep on penning... all the way from Pinas.. Aiyah

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2014 7:41:00 PM

JUN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 5:14:00 PM

Bravo! I could totally relate to this! Well done. Hey Jun welcome to Poetrysoup. Hope you have a great time reading and writing :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2014 5:05:00 PM

Jun, now that is sweet,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2014 1:46:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jun - I choose your first very well written "magic" poem - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/18/2014 12:24:00 PM

A FINE WRITE... Keep spilling ink onto paper and putting such great heart into your poetry!! BBravoooo!!!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/18/2014 11:10:00 AM

Beautiful, powerful, inspirational write. A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, my friend. Best wishes and happy writings! Pandita