Magic

Talking with you was so therapeutic
It erases all my pains and worries like magic
Sitting beside you was truly ecstatic
It makes me feel like a genius at the same time lunatic

The moment you left I felt sad
Not seeing you for a long time makes me mad
I honestly don't know what to do
My heart is demanding only you

Please tell me girl something promising
That I have a chance to be your darling
I don't care if its true or just a lie
I need to hear it from you or I will die

Yes I admit I'm just a fool
For you alone I'll risk it all
Finding you finally makes me glad
Because I'm sure with you I'm in love

By : Jun Abines

emotionscowboy poetry

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Aiyah Torres

September 7, 2014 at 11:14 PM

Hi Jun... glad to see you posting here in the most famous poetry site... your poem is really fascinating... each lines soothing in my veins... very well crafted!! ..keep on penning... all the way from Pinas.. Aiyah

Skat A

August 27, 2014 at 7:41 PM

JUN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Casarah Nance

August 18, 2014 at 5:14 PM

Bravo! I could totally relate to this! Well done. Hey Jun welcome to Poetrysoup. Hope you have a great time reading and writing :)

Poet Destroyer A

August 18, 2014 at 5:05 PM

Jun, now that is sweet,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 18, 2014 at 1:46 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jun - I choose your first very well written "magic" poem - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)