Maelstrom

in the modern world we have been hurled, the maelstrom is inside us, the greed of rich do cast their pitch, the feathers can't abide much. tarred and feathered, brainwashed for 2 blind us.... of: Kerry Singleton-s "Revelation" Don Johnson

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2012 9:57:00 PM

Don, i wonder what else stirs in the inside... I'm like Joann, on the bottom.. I'm gonna search for the poem... he he he.. A nice little ballad.. thank you... I'm always here to share a smile when and if I can... ta ta.. Good night for now... I think.. he he he.. I might still be here for an hour or so... xox.. PD

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/7/2012 8:29:00 PM

I cannot find Kerry's pomes - is she here on the soup?

Don Johnson
Date: 7/8/2012 2:26:00 AM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=30626 perhaps

Joann Grisetti
Date: 7/7/2012 8:31:00 PM

I did find this poem, and reading it backs yours much more understandable. Thanks for sahring.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/7/2012 8:27:00 PM

Your write is fantastic my friend, simply awesome! I really enjoyed your creativity here with 'the feathers can't abide much.' line, which is a beauty! Stupendous poem! Great Work!!