Maelstrom

MAELSTROM
a making
of knowledge
in
didatic
  observations
of
slow motion
thoughts
in
uncertain
images

a safe
space
on the
periphery

time-worn
yet
venerated
despite
crumbling
undercurrents
of
unease
gathering
then
plummeting
  off
stage

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand

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