Made To Suffer

Going down, DOWN
Retracted vigilance
Cast of town
Can't get a glance

Hurry up
To wait a minute
Half empty cup
Stuck in a rut

This is the final event 
Feel it coming 
Heaven sent
Time to sing

Rancid thoughts
Putrid actions
Blood clots
Counteractions

Chaos and disorder
Left me all alone
Constant torture
Cold, feeble bones

Why did you abandon
When I am so dependent
You see my perception
You put up a front

Wildly unstable 
Crash then burn
Just like the fable
Which way to turn

Tie the knot
Vanquishing halter
Carrying fraught
MADE TO SUFFER
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 10, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Hi Ryan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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November 9, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Ryan,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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