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Made To Suffer

Going down, DOWN Retracted vigilance Cast of town Can't get a glance Hurry up To wait a minute Half empty cup Stuck in a rut This is the final event Feel it coming Heaven sent Time to sing Rancid thoughts Putrid actions Blood clots Counteractions Chaos and disorder Left me all alone Constant torture Cold, feeble bones Why did you abandon When I am so dependent You see my perception You put up a front Wildly unstable Crash then burn Just like the fable Which way to turn Tie the knot Vanquishing halter Carrying fraught MADE TO SUFFER

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/10/2015 8:26:00 AM
Hi Ryan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/9/2015 5:42:00 PM
Ryan,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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