Derrick Smith Poet I do not know?

Made It

I wrote this poem in my sleep
In the darkness of my bed
It could not wait until daylight came
for the thoughts were pounding in my head

I did not want to forget a word so I grabbed my pen and started to write
To let you know that of all you did
I ended up being alright.

I write of all the hurt and pain
The many night i wanted to die.                                                                                                     
But made it through some how

I wrote this poem while in the dark
To remind me of what i had gone though
When hope was lost the sun didn't shine 
Because of the love i'll lost with you 

I did not want to forget the feeling 
The way i felt on that special day 
I did not want to forget the hurt 
I felt you left when you went away

 I wrote in the darkness cause i was glad
Cause finally there was light and i could see
That love is not as selfish and hurtful as you 
And i made it through some how

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Maurice Yvonne August 22, 2014 at 9:40 PM another good read. your writing really pulls the reader in. thank you. Derrick Smith August 30, 2014 at 3:21 AM I thank you for your kind words and I am glad that you find something of interest in my work

Emmanuel Brian Oule July 7, 2014 at 10:32 AM wowo writing in darkness must have been amazing its a thrilling one i loved it Smith Bryan writes @T.m.T Emmanuel Brian Oule July 25, 2014 at 5:41 AM any time Derrick Smith July 23, 2014 at 1:55 AM Thank you Bryan