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Made In Paradise

I Have Been To Paradise, Living In My Former Life, Gotten Lost I Was- In An Angel's Eyes- Worth A Reminisce- Are Those Moments Before My Demise, Butterflies Of Amazement- Flew In The Skies Near, Before My Eyes- She Shined- Something Like A Chandelier. Like A Moon, Like A Diamond, Something Within The Skies, Brought Heaven, Brought Tranquil, Brought Smiles, She Who Came To Embrace, Has Fallen Upon Me, As A Grace, There I Found Her, I Found My Heart's Resting Place, An Unspeakable Beauty, Thus Caused Damage To My Plain Eyes, As I Perceived It- I Could Hear My Heart Say- Oh, Dearly Nice! Could I Be Wrong To Have Fallen For Such A Being, An Extraordinary Woman- Beyond What My Eyes Have Ever Seen, Groundless Became My Silence- And Trembled Was My Soul, Such A Sight Was An Angel's- She Wasn't Any Habitual Woman At All, So I Prayed To Allah- To Bless Me Not With Power Or Lasting Soul, But The Wealth To See Her As The Last One Beneath My Fall. She Bewitched I, Amazingly, Stole My Heart Otherworldly- She Was Spotless, Something Made In Paradise, Her Eyes Looked Somewhat Like The Sun Rise, And Mines Were Fixed On Hers In Disbelief- Feeling My Heart Turn Colder, I Was Spellbound- As If Beauty Wasn't In The Eyes Of The Beholder.

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Date: 12/25/2015 5:19:00 AM
Magnificent write.
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:58:00 AM
An enchanting and magical poem.... Congrats DeeGee, for having it featured in the Poetry Soup homepage! ;-)
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:12:00 AM
DeeGee , Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Deegee Anarka
Date: 2/20/2015 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Skat- very much
Date: 2/13/2015 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,DeeGee, very descriptive write,a 7. Blessings Eve
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Deegee Anarka
Date: 2/20/2015 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Eve, I appreciate you a lot.
Date: 2/13/2015 2:17:00 PM
beautiful flow to the poem congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Deegee Anarka
Date: 2/20/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank You Jan! More nd more hugs back your way xoxo
Date: 2/12/2015 9:27:00 PM
DeeGee, nice rhythm, lovely poem, congratulations on your placement. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Deegee Anarka
Date: 2/20/2015 7:06:00 PM
Thank you Sheri,
Date: 10/11/2014 1:08:00 AM
Nice,how finished.
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Deegee Anarka
Date: 2/20/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thank You Brother Mohammad, by the way my real name is Abdulkhadir also known as Bilal....Shukran!!!

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