Made In Paradise

I Have Been To Paradise,
Living In My Former Life,
Gotten Lost I Was- In An Angel's Eyes-
Worth A Reminisce- Are Those Moments Before My Demise,
Butterflies Of Amazement- Flew In The Skies Near,
Before My Eyes- She Shined- Something Like A Chandelier.

Like A Moon, Like A Diamond, Something Within The Skies,
Brought Heaven, Brought Tranquil, Brought Smiles,
She Who Came To Embrace, Has Fallen Upon Me, As A Grace,
There I Found Her, I Found My Heart's Resting Place,
An Unspeakable Beauty, Thus Caused Damage To My Plain Eyes,
As I Perceived It- I Could Hear My Heart Say- Oh, Dearly Nice!

 Could I Be Wrong To Have Fallen For Such A Being,
An Extraordinary Woman- Beyond What My Eyes Have Ever Seen,
Groundless Became My Silence- And Trembled Was My Soul,
Such A Sight Was An Angel's- She Wasn't Any Habitual Woman At All,
So I Prayed To Allah- To Bless Me Not With Power Or Lasting Soul, 
But The Wealth To See Her As The Last One Beneath My Fall.
 
She Bewitched I, Amazingly,
Stole My Heart Otherworldly-
She Was Spotless, Something Made In Paradise,
Her Eyes Looked Somewhat Like The Sun Rise,
And Mines Were Fixed On Hers In Disbelief- Feeling My Heart Turn Colder,
I Was Spellbound- As If Beauty Wasn't In The Eyes Of The Beholder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bright Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 5:19 AM
Magnificent write.
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December 24, 2015 at 3:58 AM
An enchanting and magical poem.... Congrats DeeGee, for having it featured in the Poetry Soup homepage! ;-)
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February 16, 2015 at 12:12 AM
DeeGee , Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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February 20, 2015 at 7:02 PM
Thank you Skat- very much
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February 13, 2015 at 6:35 PM
Congratulations on your win,DeeGee, very descriptive write,a 7. Blessings Eve
Anarka Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Thank you Eve, I appreciate you a lot.
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 2:17 PM
beautiful flow to the poem congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Anarka Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Thank You Jan! More nd more hugs back your way xoxo
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February 12, 2015 at 9:27 PM
DeeGee, nice rhythm, lovely poem, congratulations on your placement. Thanks for entering my contest.
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February 20, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Thank you Sheri,
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October 11, 2014 at 1:08 AM
Nice,how finished.
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February 20, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Thank You Brother Mohammad, by the way my real name is Abdulkhadir also known as Bilal....Shukran!!!
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