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Maddie Takes the Blame

All by myself, alone, I softly chant your name, Own up for our defunct weeping bond and I take the blame. It was our love very pure and not lusty lure, Unsure, kaput and insecure I thirstily quest for love’s cure…… Will not otieously shed another vainful tear But in earnest long for you my Dear to be near. Messed up our bond with blatant, glaring guilt & shattered our own heart, Guess that’s the only reason we in our lives drifted apart. Cannot truly imagine that I let you go, But for us to be happy I did so, I own up and take the blame, To silently blow off our love’s flame….. My heart I am sure you did not know, Was tattered and torn from the time I let you go, Ours was a bond carefree and Boehme, I Own up for our broken weeping bond and take the blame. I wish our bonds could have fondly stayed on, Woven intertwined with emotions, enameled with love’s lacquerers firmly bound. But I still take the blame, And not dampen loves flickering flame with a sense of shame…… Now that my love, its end seems so near, Sense its icy claws draw up and stealthy steps I hear, I own up and take the blame…………… And fling my heart’s longings up above without aim again and again…till our laden guilt we overcame….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/5/2012 10:31:00 AM
lovely piece, my friend. many congrats on your win
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 4/5/2012 12:26:00 PM
thanks Jack
Date: 4/5/2012 7:31:00 AM
I really like this poem a lot Sashi. There is a lot of emotion in it! :)
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 4/5/2012 7:34:00 AM
hey Samia, thanks for stopping by and the warm words of appreciation!...~sashi
Date: 4/3/2012 12:45:00 PM
lovely capture of an elusive emotion always p.d.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 4/3/2012 7:25:00 PM
thank you PD.............~sashi

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