Mack

Here lies Mack
Flat on his back
Sleeping like a baby
His guts are worms
All full of germs
His brain is just a gravy
He was a tool
Drowned in a pool
For children 3 and under
Why so dumb?
No one knows
We can only wonder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
March 12, 2026 at 11:08 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Roy Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Liked the rhyming structure in this poem. Couplet followed by enclosed rhyme. Regards,
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