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Macabre

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Murder Inc. in Catskill mountains, Southeast portion of New York State, during time of 

great criminal activity during prohibition and a short ime after.

MACABRE 

Mayhem like flotsam wood.
Metropolis types out:
Murder. Victim floating -
Marred, strapped to slot machine.
Macabre tourist sight.
Mountains blue, green and RED,
Malice toward fellow man.

2nd Place
4/19/2017
Pleiades Form - M contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Mark Martin
Date: 5/1/2017 7:39:00 AM
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Disturbing imagery - great Pleiades! Congratulations Kim on your win! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2017 10:02:00 AM
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Thanks, Mark!
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 4/29/2017 5:48:00 AM
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this is a very good pleiades, with good choice of words...i do enjoy your writing...congrats on your win in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2017 10:04:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Charlotte! xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2017 10:04:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Charlotte! xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 4/28/2017 8:37:00 PM
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A unique and creative topic with great imagery! Congrats on your 2nd place win, Kim! Blessings, Kim M.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:45:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Kim!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/25/2017 7:39:00 AM
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Congrats on your placement, Kim--a 7. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:33:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Janice!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/25/2017 7:13:00 AM
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The sixth line beautifies the macabre ... beautiful pick up from life ... congratulations on your fine win ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:34:00 AM
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Thank you, Probir!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 4/24/2017 8:34:00 AM
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Menacing words indeed! Congrats on a fine win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:34:00 AM
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Thank you, Sushma!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2017 2:09:00 PM
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- A great poem on the letter "M", Kim :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:34:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!
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Joseph May
Date: 4/23/2017 8:28:00 AM
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Congrats on your win Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2017 11:36:00 AM
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Thank you, Joseph!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/23/2017 7:36:00 AM
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Oh, what a GREAT word you chose, Kim. I enjoyed your write - congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2017 11:36:00 AM
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Thank you, Agnes!
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John Michaels
Date: 4/23/2017 3:58:00 AM
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Interesting angle on the theme - and macabre is such a great word!! Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2017 6:47:00 AM
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Thank you, John!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2017 6:43:00 AM
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Thank you, John!

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