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Murder Inc. in Catskill mountains, Southeast portion of New York State, during time of

great criminal activity during prohibition and a short ime after.

MACABRE Mayhem like flotsam wood. Metropolis types out: Murder. Victim floating - Marred, strapped to slot machine. Macabre tourist sight. Mountains blue, green and RED, Malice toward fellow man. 2nd Place 4/19/2017 Pleiades Form - M contest

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Mark Martin

Date: 5/1/2017 7:39:00 AM

Disturbing imagery - great Pleiades! Congratulations Kim on your win! :-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2017 10:02:00 AM

Thanks, Mark!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/29/2017 5:48:00 AM

this is a very good pleiades, with good choice of words...i do enjoy your writing...congrats on your win in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2017 10:04:00 AM

Thanks so much, Charlotte! xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2017 10:04:00 AM

Thanks so much, Charlotte! xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/28/2017 8:37:00 PM

A unique and creative topic with great imagery! Congrats on your 2nd place win, Kim! Blessings, Kim M.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:45:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/25/2017 7:39:00 AM

Congrats on your placement, Kim--a 7. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:33:00 AM

Thanks so much, Janice!

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/25/2017 7:13:00 AM

The sixth line beautifies the macabre ... beautiful pick up from life ... congratulations on your fine win ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:34:00 AM

Thank you, Probir!

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 4/24/2017 8:34:00 AM

Menacing words indeed! Congrats on a fine win, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:34:00 AM

Thank you, Sushma!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2017 2:09:00 PM

- A great poem on the letter "M", Kim :) - Congratulations on your winning poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:34:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!

Joseph May

Date: 4/23/2017 8:28:00 AM

Congrats on your win Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2017 11:36:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/23/2017 7:36:00 AM

Oh, what a GREAT word you chose, Kim. I enjoyed your write - congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2017 11:36:00 AM

Thank you, Agnes!

John Michaels

Date: 4/23/2017 3:58:00 AM

Interesting angle on the theme - and macabre is such a great word!! Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2017 6:47:00 AM

Thank you, John!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2017 6:43:00 AM

Thank you, John!