Macabre

beware the dark night
         zombies lurk to snatch raw flesh --
      blood oozing on nails


in macabre hours--
     spiked claws  rip heart valves
for howling  carnage


say all your prayers
     before chainsaws rupture heads--
 massacre starts, now



Contest of Tracie: Spooky 'Ku
by nette onclaud

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Tim Ryerson

November 2, 2012 at 12:06 AM

Yikes!!...MACABRE for sure!...Now I'm scared to go outside!...Great entry, Nette and congratulations, of course - Tim

Poet Destroyer A

November 1, 2012 at 4:11 PM

Nette, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

Audrey Haick

October 30, 2012 at 2:33 PM

Congrats on your fabulous win, Nette! Sc-a-a-ry! Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

October 30, 2012 at 1:53 PM

Nette, I loved the descriptiveness of yours. BIG congrats on your win.

Bukang Liwayway

October 30, 2012 at 9:57 AM

Big Congratulations to you friend Nette for winning Tracie’s “”Spooky Ku” contest. Happy Halloween!(^_^) hugs!!

Len Gasun

October 30, 2012 at 7:56 AM

Big congratulations with big hugs on your win my dear Nette! love/hugs:)LG/Norie

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 30, 2012 at 6:27 AM

Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Patricia Ellis

October 30, 2012 at 2:59 AM

Spooky ku! Happy Haloween !

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

October 30, 2012 at 2:25 AM

Congratulations on your spooky ku nette xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 30, 2012 at 2:21 AM

Congratulations with your spooky Halloween Haiku poems! - Hoping for a scary Halloween night - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Booooo

Bl Devnath

October 30, 2012 at 12:44 AM

Wonderful win for wonderful poem, my friend. Loved always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 30, 2012 at 12:12 AM

SUPER CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A MAJESTIC SPOOKY KU WRITE AND TOP OF THE CHARTS WIN .. LUV IT LUV ..

Matthew Anish

October 29, 2012 at 11:58 AM

Good luck in the contest and Happy Halloween Matthew Anish

Kash Poet

October 25, 2012 at 3:48 AM

Enjoyed these spooky ku very much Nette!Best wishes to you.

Dinda Minardi

October 24, 2012 at 9:46 AM

This reminds me of walking dead and texas chainsaw massacre movie.. Wouldn't want a nightmare after reading this ;)

Len Gasun

October 21, 2012 at 7:34 PM

Hi, nette! Hope you're always fine. Yes, I am! Have a nice day always there! hugs tight, Leonora/norie

Sara Kendrick

October 21, 2012 at 1:28 PM

Whoa!!Scary one..Very descriptive Halloween work..If for a contest, winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by ..I have finished my Luna now..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

October 21, 2012 at 11:18 AM

wow, now THAT'S how to do scary Ku. it's for the contest , right? I would sure place this one on my winners' list!!

Russell Sivey

October 21, 2012 at 9:46 AM

YES!! You did it Nette, you created an awesome Halloween write! I am so delighted to read such a wondrous write as this! I really really enjoyed this incredibly dynamic and honorable poem! You have done masterfully with these fine Haiku displaying wonderful zombies and their playful death marches! I love this remarkable and tremendous piece, very stupendous, Great Work!!

Rachel St.Cross

October 21, 2012 at 9:00 AM

‡ Night Of The Living Dead, The Howling, Texas Chainsaw Massacre *;* Spooky, I Was Waiting For Linda Blair To Pop Out Of The Screeen And Start Vomiting All Over My Pink Pee Soaked Dress, LOL. Love It. Hi, Sweet Beautiful Nette. Great Poe And Thank You For Passing By; Very Kind. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡