Ma Feets

Ah gotsta tell y’all ‘bout ma own two feet,
Fo transportation dey can’t be beat.

I’m right proud a them clod hoppers, see,
Cause they always trekin’ on ahead a me.

Don’t reckon dey ain’t no place dey ain’t never been,
And if’n dey was I fo sho cainst remember when..

An I remember onced when dese ole clodhoppers,
Churned like lightning from some bad coppers.

Now dey don’t always get me out of a lurch,
Sundays dey carry me on down to church.

An when the old widow next door needs favors,
Why dese ole feet a mine hit them pavers.

Lord dey was your transportation I read in the bible,
So in my book dese feets got no rival.

Member that lady what washed yours an dried em with her hair?
I like to think I’d a maybe helped her if I’d a been dere…

Anyway, thank you Lord for my favorite transportation,
Saves me a heap a money at the gaslene station!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Henderson Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 12:11 AM
I really really like this. You should do it for a trademark. Like it's your thing. Pull out my poem "Bindled", it is somewhat on the same note but no coloquilisms. I don't think I could do them this well. charles
Bono Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Haven't heard from you for awhile.Wanted to stop by and say hello.Haven't been on much lately.Enjoying the sun while I can.Hope all is well.Have a great day.
Austin Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 10:42 AM
Shucks! Hey! Aint nuthin beats ridin' on ma pet hawg. Had ta bucher it though ta other day...got lame in one foot. Glad to see you haven't lost that great sense of humor. Dave
Devonshire Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Hi Bob, we chose the same form of "transportation," but your poem is far more clever. Love the country lingo and the humor! Well done. Best wishes in Barbara's contest. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 3:29 PM
Good work in this one that should do well in the competition..Good luck..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Terrific write Robert.. good luck in the contest.. feet don't fail me now and they never do.. I am a walker too .. amazing your words hit home and your play on words ..so cool my friend..with luv.. my best to Taz and Mary please..luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Oh Robert.. u must try Adeleke's contest and Catie's contest.. right venue for blessings my friend..with luv..
Delacroix Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 11:21 PM
Fun couplet to read, Robert, very picturesque! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Culverhouse Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:22 PM
cute poem
A   Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Enjoyed your couplets Robert, good luck in the wheels contest,..p.d.
Taylor Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Outstanding, Bob. Awesome write. Good luck. All the best. Ralph
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