Lyin In Bed

roses are red
violets are blue
only if you knew how in love i am with you,
maybe youd love me back,
maybe love is something you lack 
youll lay in bed tonight with a face lit bright,
ill lay in bed with a new thin line on my arm, in red
trust me, you not knowing me is not why i do this
cutting is just my new found bliss.
if people knew, they'd call me crazy,
if people knew, they might care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:37 AM
Your message is vivid, clear and conspicuously imaginative. Good work and definitely a 7
Denny Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 2:35 PM
thanks so much i appreciate your reply
Adams Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 8:17 AM
People do care, Anastasia. By reading your first two poems, I know you have a good heart and a lovely soul. I already like that about you. But, there is One who loves you unconditionally, and always. He is Father to us all. He is the author of love. Look to Him for comfort. He alone will never fail you.
Denny Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Yes I do believe this ,he has been there for me when no one else has
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