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Lydia's Daddy

...eyes puffy caked up with cry Daddy ain't comin' home but she don't know why... grown folk sadness ripping inside her All she's known about lovin's in the coffin beside her

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/2/2011 8:28:00 PM
I'm one among some who can identify with Lydia. My loss of loved ones has caused me my share of some major emotional hysteria. Great write my friend. Keep em commin.
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Date: 9/25/2011 4:49:00 PM
Terrific sad write...with love....old Jack
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:45:00 PM
ooooh, yes, now THIS one really grabs me. Short and very clear. Love this one!
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:12:00 AM
well penned JS...a sad piece yet so beautifully written....smiles....chiquita
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Date: 9/11/2011 12:24:00 PM
color of sadness flows yet beautifully painted with your words... likey this, JS!..:) huggs, nette
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