Joseph May Poet Verse

Lustrous Luna

Lustrous Luna works midnight magic
 As it glitters golden in rhythmic ripples
 Onto ocean's briny billows,
 Distant diamonds flicker a twinkling tune
 as winds whoosh through the palm trees,
 Lovers lost in enchanted embrace
 Find fulfillment in gleeful gazes

 This is  an example for Contest, 
 Similar Vowel sounds are allowed, (lines 3 and 6), but  in 2 lines only.

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Eve Roper December 27, 2021 at 10:43 PM great example

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2021 at 3:41 PM Came here to say thanks for my win in your lovely contest, Joseph.

Joanna Daniel November 22, 2021 at 10:22 PM Splendid example, Joseph, simply enchanting:)

Jan Allison November 17, 2021 at 2:03 PM gosh this looks challenging Joseph, will try and write but my muse is still so sleepy, hugs jan xx Joseph May November 17, 2021 at 6:18 PM Thank you Jan, hope you will try this form and I hope you are feeling better

Jennifer Proxenos November 14, 2021 at 4:36 AM THE MOON IS BEAUTIFUL, BUT IS A TEMPTRESS, PEOPLE CANNOT HELP BUT INDULGE IN ROMANCE FOR THE MOON IS ENTICING AND EXCITING, AND PROMISES OF ETERNAL LOVE SEEM THE NATURAL THING TO DO IN THE MOONLIGHT - SORRY ABOUT CAPS. JOSEPH - it happens sometimes. Joseph May November 17, 2021 at 6:18 PM Thank you Jennifer

Anitha Jayasankar November 10, 2021 at 9:42 AM What an amazing example for your contest Joseph...So beautiful...God bless...~ Ani Joseph May November 17, 2021 at 6:17 PM Thank you Anitha

Heidi Sands November 10, 2021 at 7:42 AM Beautifully written :) Joseph May November 17, 2021 at 6:17 PM Thank you Heidi

Anisha Dutta November 6, 2021 at 10:40 PM So nice. I am charmed. Have a good day. Joseph May November 17, 2021 at 6:17 PM Thank you Anisha

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2021 at 4:23 PM a fantastic example, Joseph. I don't know if I asked you already, but can the alliteration be inside or at the end of words as well? Sorry if I already asked and you answered me. I am getting so forgetful! Joseph May November 5, 2021 at 4:54 PM Thanks Andrea, Check your soup mail

Connie Marcum Wong November 5, 2021 at 2:22 PM It will be a real challenge to try to top your examples Joseph. I loved this one too. Blessings xxoo Joseph May November 5, 2021 at 2:42 PM Thank you Connie, I think some entries have

Eve Roper November 5, 2021 at 7:27 AM Very soothing verse with great imagery, Joseph. Distant diamonds flicker a twinkling tune as winds whoosh through the palm tree. the sound so plain to hear. Enjoyed reading. Joseph May November 5, 2021 at 2:42 PM Thank you Eve

Brandy Nicole November 4, 2021 at 9:24 AM Such a beautiful thought. "glitters golden in rhythmic ripples" So dreamy and romantic. Everything about the moon is so magical and mysterious. Your thoughts caress softly around me. :) Brandy Joseph May November 5, 2021 at 2:41 PM Thank you Brandy

Vijay Pandit November 3, 2021 at 7:43 AM Cleverly done, Joseph. Finding fulfillment---great word pairing throughout. Joseph May November 5, 2021 at 2:41 PM Thank you Vijay, it takes time to do these

Victor Buhagiar November 2, 2021 at 11:31 PM Great romance in this sample for your contest. Joseph May November 3, 2021 at 7:04 AM Thank you Victor