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Lust

Men’s eyes explored as her gown sagged off her shoulder. 7/24/2017 Poetry Contest: Lust Sponsored by: Lewis Raynes

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Date: 8/4/2017 9:48:00 PM
Congrats! That's it exactly!
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Date: 7/30/2017 9:22:00 PM
I am blushing at the imagery. So well expressed Eve. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/30/2017 7:48:00 PM
If I close my eyes, I better be blind...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/30/2017 9:45:00 PM
I think I've read most of your work Eve, you are very talented..
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/30/2017 8:30:00 PM
How cute, I love your comment.. Pashang, thank you so much for your visit ~*
Date: 7/29/2017 6:52:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/29/2017 6:58:00 PM
Thank you so very much :) ~*
Date: 7/29/2017 11:09:00 AM
Mental image captured; lovely write, Eve! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:58:00 PM
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Date: 7/29/2017 8:44:00 AM
Hi Eve, provocative. Congrats! :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/29/2017 6:57:00 PM
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Date: 7/26/2017 5:20:00 PM
Yes, that is it exactly, Eve!
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:57:00 PM
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Date: 7/26/2017 5:17:00 PM
Lol! Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:57:00 PM
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Date: 7/26/2017 3:22:00 PM
So sexy and so true. All it takes is a glance. Good luck in the contest Eve.
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:57:00 PM
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Date: 7/26/2017 1:12:00 PM
Who knows...she might have done that purposely by keeping it loose...Lol! I like this one very much, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/29/2017 6:57:00 PM
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Date: 7/25/2017 4:21:00 PM
I have come across several poems dealing with lust today...just realized now that a contest is brewing:) Your words cannot be contradicted, Eve, though I feel the lady could be a bit of a tease! Regards // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/29/2017 6:56:00 PM
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Date: 7/25/2017 1:42:00 PM
Best wishes on this one-liner. Good work.
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:56:00 PM
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Date: 7/25/2017 12:56:00 PM
Nice, a whole story in one line :) xomo!
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:56:00 PM
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Date: 7/25/2017 9:41:00 AM
So true and in so few words, great write, Eve:)
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:56:00 PM
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Date: 7/25/2017 4:27:00 AM
I really love this Monoku of yours Eve. You set the seductive scene well in such a few words. Good Luck in the contest, I really feel you have a winner here...Maria
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Date: 7/29/2017 6:56:00 PM
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Date: 7/25/2017 1:18:00 AM
I am enjoying all the great entries Eve. Yours has great imagery leading to sensual thought! Great one Eve! : )
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/29/2017 6:55:00 PM
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