Lust

Men’s eyes explored as her gown sagged off her shoulder. 

7/24/2017

Poetry Contest: Lust 
Sponsored by: Lewis Raynes

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Alesia Leach

August 4, 2017 at 9:48 PM

Congrats! That's it exactly!

Dean Wood

July 30, 2017 at 9:22 PM

I am blushing at the imagery. So well expressed Eve. Congratulations.

Pashang Salehi

July 30, 2017 at 7:48 PM

If I close my eyes, I better be blind...

Pashang Salehi

July 30, 2017 at 9:45 PM

I think I've read most of your work Eve, you are very talented..

Eve Roper

July 30, 2017 at 8:30 PM

How cute, I love your comment.. Pashang, thank you so much for your visit ~*

Joseph May

July 29, 2017 at 6:52 PM

Congrats on a fine win Eve

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:58 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

John Michaels

July 29, 2017 at 11:09 AM

Mental image captured; lovely write, Eve! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:58 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Susan Ashley

July 29, 2017 at 8:44 AM

Hi Eve, provocative. Congrats! :)

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:57 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2017 at 5:20 PM

Yes, that is it exactly, Eve!

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:57 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Afolabi Muideen

July 26, 2017 at 5:17 PM

Lol! Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:57 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Jean Murray

July 26, 2017 at 3:22 PM

So sexy and so true. All it takes is a glance. Good luck in the contest Eve.

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:57 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Afzal Nusker

July 26, 2017 at 1:12 PM

Who knows...she might have done that purposely by keeping it loose...Lol! I like this one very much, Eve.

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:57 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Paul Callus

July 25, 2017 at 4:21 PM

I have come across several poems dealing with lust today...just realized now that a contest is brewing:) Your words cannot be contradicted, Eve, though I feel the lady could be a bit of a tease! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:56 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Curtis Johnson

July 25, 2017 at 1:42 PM

Best wishes on this one-liner. Good work.

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:56 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 25, 2017 at 12:56 PM

Nice, a whole story in one line :) xomo!

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:56 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Joanna Daniel

July 25, 2017 at 9:41 AM

So true and in so few words, great write, Eve:)

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:56 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*

Maria Williams

July 25, 2017 at 4:27 AM

I really love this Monoku of yours Eve. You set the seductive scene well in such a few words. Good Luck in the contest, I really feel you have a winner here...Maria

Eve Roper

July 29, 2017 at 6:56 PM

Thank you so very much :) ~*