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Luscious Osculation

Honeysuckle smiles, With hummingbird’s gentle peck: Saccharine kisses.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 5/9/2010 8:03:00 PM

nice write raul ...... i love it when these birds come around .......

Courtney Dyer

Date: 5/3/2010 9:20:00 PM

Heavenly!

Sue Mason

Date: 5/2/2010 3:02:00 PM

Awesome title ... "osculation" is such a great word ... makes kiss seem kind of silly ... LOL ... wonderful write here, Raul. Hope you are enjoying beautiful spring days!!

Rick Parise

Date: 4/29/2010 6:27:00 PM

Im so happy you enjoyed "Trek" Thank you for my first # 1 ~~Much appreciated!! ~~I await your creativity on the green little guy~~much inspiration to you! and God bless~Rick

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/29/2010 8:40:00 AM

Nicely description of the flying jewels, Raúl. I love hummingbirds and remember when they were suckling nectar from flowers in Santiago de Chile, long time ago. Thank you also for your kind comments! Chao y suerte!...Gert

David Neal

Date: 4/28/2010 8:05:00 AM

Thanks for placing me in your contest. I like your version of the photo.

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/27/2010 8:21:00 PM

Great description of a hummingbird feeding. thank you Raul for choosing my 'little Wattlebird' the honeyeaters are very like hummingbirds but not quite so delicate. keep 'em coming...Margaret

Rick Parise

Date: 4/27/2010 5:54:00 PM

Thank you Sir for my top list finish !!A smile for you and your descriptive poem !!Blessings~~~Rick

Date: 4/27/2010 2:05:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Creative use of personification. The last line works well with the first. Keep that pen flowing. You have Soup Mail! Karen

Derrick Burton

Date: 4/27/2010 1:58:00 PM

Short and wonderful, hope you stop by to check out my latest. Enjoy your day.:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 12:25:00 PM

SOUP MAIL...luv..

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2010 8:31:00 AM

Hey Raul! Thx for giving me the honor of placing in your sponsored contest, Bro! It means a lot to me...Jimmy

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/27/2010 8:16:00 AM

I like heavy honey/sugar kisses, personally--but that is just me. Enjoyed reading today!!

Richard Pickett

Date: 4/27/2010 7:54:00 AM

Ahhhh, how sweet it is...Well Done here Raul...God Bless...Taz

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 7:01:00 AM

Your words are luscious Raul to describe the hummingbird photo... nice imagery too.. thankxxx for this terrific contest and though my Replenishment did not place this time its a constant joy to enter and increase creativeness ... u are a wonderful inspiration to the poets on Soup as we all enjoy your contests so much... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2010 4:42:00 AM

well done,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2010 3:20:00 AM

Now, Raul, no way....Nothing artificial here that is made from coal tar...Enjoyed the first two lines...Sara

Allie Lusha

Date: 4/27/2010 2:38:00 AM

As sweet as sugar and what a divine title...Loving it....Allie