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Luscious Osculation

Honeysuckle smiles,
With hummingbird’s gentle peck:
Saccharine kisses.

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Abe Lopez

May 9, 2010 at 8:03 PM

nice write raul ...... i love it when these birds come around .......

Courtney Dyer

May 3, 2010 at 9:20 PM

Heavenly!

Sue Mason

May 2, 2010 at 3:02 PM

Awesome title ... "osculation" is such a great word ... makes kiss seem kind of silly ... LOL ... wonderful write here, Raul. Hope you are enjoying beautiful spring days!!

Gert W. Knop

April 29, 2010 at 8:40 AM

Nicely description of the flying jewels, Raúl. I love hummingbirds and remember when they were suckling nectar from flowers in Santiago de Chile, long time ago. Thank you also for your kind comments! Chao y suerte!...Gert

David Neal

April 28, 2010 at 8:05 AM

Thanks for placing me in your contest. I like your version of the photo.

Margaret Foster

April 27, 2010 at 8:21 PM

Great description of a hummingbird feeding. thank you Raul for choosing my 'little Wattlebird' the honeyeaters are very like hummingbirds but not quite so delicate. keep 'em coming...Margaret

April 27, 2010 at 2:05 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Creative use of personification. The last line works well with the first. Keep that pen flowing. You have Soup Mail! Karen

Derrick Burton

April 27, 2010 at 1:58 PM

Short and wonderful, hope you stop by to check out my latest. Enjoy your day.:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 27, 2010 at 12:25 PM

SOUP MAIL...luv..

Jimmy Anderson

April 27, 2010 at 8:31 AM

Hey Raul! Thx for giving me the honor of placing in your sponsored contest, Bro! It means a lot to me...Jimmy

Doris Culverhouse

April 27, 2010 at 8:16 AM

I like heavy honey/sugar kisses, personally--but that is just me. Enjoyed reading today!!

Richard Pickett

April 27, 2010 at 7:54 AM

Ahhhh, how sweet it is...Well Done here Raul...God Bless...Taz

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 27, 2010 at 7:01 AM

Your words are luscious Raul to describe the hummingbird photo... nice imagery too.. thankxxx for this terrific contest and though my Replenishment did not place this time its a constant joy to enter and increase creativeness ... u are a wonderful inspiration to the poets on Soup as we all enjoy your contests so much... luv.. "Sweetheart"