Luscious Lips

soft luscious lips received a kiss
that was ice cold without bliss
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Watt Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 7:44 PM
I like how you wrote about an ice cold kiss in the 'Crystalline' poetry form! Best wishes in the contest, Alexis!
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 5:52 PM
It seems as if a cold front moved through right at the wrong moment! ~ Lips of Ice
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 3:56 PM
now THIS kind of kiss we do NOT want to have. Great rhyming effect with this one. Hope to see it on the winner list.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 4:29 AM
Blissfull writing dearest, Alexis! Hugs xxx
One Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 4:00 AM
Damn.... No need for such kisses.. just warm sensual ones.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 3:36 AM
How sad a contrast. Best for a win. ~~
Dutta Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 8:21 PM
GREAT. All the best
Leffanta Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 12:18 PM
Yet Eskimos endure! Aloha! Rico
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