Luscious Lips

soft luscious lips received a kiss that was ice cold without bliss

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John Watt

Date: 11/15/2020 7:44:00 PM

I like how you wrote about an ice cold kiss in the 'Crystalline' poetry form! Best wishes in the contest, Alexis!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/15/2020 5:52:00 PM

It seems as if a cold front moved through right at the wrong moment! ~ Lips of Ice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2020 3:56:00 PM

now THIS kind of kiss we do NOT want to have. Great rhyming effect with this one. Hope to see it on the winner list.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/15/2020 4:29:00 AM

Blissfull writing dearest, Alexis! Hugs xxx

Silent One

Date: 11/15/2020 4:00:00 AM

Damn.... No need for such kisses.. just warm sensual ones.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/15/2020 3:36:00 AM

How sad a contrast. Best for a win. ~~

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/14/2020 8:21:00 PM

GREAT. All the best

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/14/2020 12:18:00 PM

Yet Eskimos endure! Aloha! Rico