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Luscious Lips

soft luscious lips received a kiss that was ice cold without bliss

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John Watt
Date: 11/15/2020 7:44:00 PM
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I like how you wrote about an ice cold kiss in the 'Crystalline' poetry form! Best wishes in the contest, Alexis!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/15/2020 5:52:00 PM
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It seems as if a cold front moved through right at the wrong moment! ~ Lips of Ice
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/15/2020 3:56:00 PM
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now THIS kind of kiss we do NOT want to have. Great rhyming effect with this one. Hope to see it on the winner list.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/15/2020 4:29:00 AM
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Blissfull writing dearest, Alexis! Hugs xxx
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Silent One
Date: 11/15/2020 4:00:00 AM
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Damn.... No need for such kisses.. just warm sensual ones.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 11/15/2020 3:36:00 AM
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How sad a contrast. Best for a win. ~~
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/14/2020 8:21:00 PM
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GREAT. All the best
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/14/2020 12:18:00 PM
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Yet Eskimos endure! Aloha! Rico
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