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luscious bubble gum ice cream blue 
glides below virgin strokes ghost white
splattered against canvas framed sky



01~01~2015
Armand

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/2/2015 5:10:00 PM

ahh you are a magician! Light & Love

Daver Austin

Date: 1/10/2015 10:15:00 AM

A fascinating no-stop read. Great write. Love, daver

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2015 11:00:00 AM

Hi Armand...I can't believe that this joyous and charming write is not on the judge's list!! I give it a top rating; for me it's a winner! The first line was enough to grab my attention. Look after that precious pen! // paul

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/3/2015 3:37:00 PM

A very beautifully penned poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 1:24:00 PM

Seeing what you wrote to rhonda about your name. it is so sweet how you have taken such good care of those parents that you honor with your pen name. You are multi talented because I would never have guessed you had not been writing poetry for a long time until you told me otherwise!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2015 1:22:00 PM

marvelous imagery!! I do love that ice cream blue bubble gum line a LOT. Nette should really like this one. a SEVEN!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/2/2015 1:31:00 AM

I love the image you created with just your words. The picture doesn't show as much...Happy New Year, Maurice!! I have to ask you why you would use a pen name when you have such a great given name? I had to ask! Hugs, Rhonda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/2/2015 3:09:00 AM

Thanks for sharing. I'm happy to learn more about you. I suppose writing poetry is like directing your own mini play. Either that or it just comes naturally for you!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 1/2/2015 2:51:00 AM

My pen name is composed of my Father's and Mother's first names. I chose it to honor them. Also I am a stage director not a poet. My first postings on a site for poets were here just less than six months ago. I have my Masters in Dramatic Arts but no education in writing whatsover. Lots Of Love, Armand.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/1/2015 10:34:00 PM

A lovely image and interpretation of visual #2. Very nice work, Armand. This should do well in nette's contest! Good luck!... Happy New Year! I wish you all the best for 2015!

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 1/1/2015 7:03:00 PM

Hey Maurice, Your poem is excellent, I think it's a few lines of perfection.