Eve Roper Poet Verse

Lune--Dolor

black white keys
cowed in  pain and hurt
great and deep 

years of dreams
sear by one's blind trust
spent by age


5/10/2020

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Paul Callus May 19, 2020 at 3:50 PM This lovely poem is a real mover of emotions, Eve. 'Dolor' s a very suitable title. ~ Congratulations on your deserved win. Hugs // paul

Sam Kauffman May 14, 2020 at 2:47 PM Poignant and pensive, my friend. Congratulations on your win!

Caren Krutsinger May 14, 2020 at 2:14 AM Congratulations on your deep winning missive my friend.

Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2020 at 9:41 PM Can feel the pain! Nicely done, Eve! Congrats!

Suzanne Delaney May 13, 2020 at 6:53 PM Yes when time runs out so do Dreams. congratulations on a fine write. SuZ

John Watt May 13, 2020 at 1:09 PM Eve, you poured a lot of melancholy into a tiny space. Well done, and congrats ~ John

Aditi Mishra May 13, 2020 at 12:07 PM This is so pure, with the aging of dreams and keys. Congratulations! :)

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2020 at 8:40 PM very poignant, just like I like 'em, Eve.

Jennifer Proxenos May 11, 2020 at 11:43 AM Hi Eve, awesome philosopher and talented poetess is what you are. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Mohan Chutani May 10, 2020 at 10:48 PM Eve, life's philosophy, hidden in these black & white notes. Deep. Best. Mohan Mohan Chutani May 13, 2020 at 6:44 PM Coming back to congratulate you on a fine win.

Paghunda Zahid May 10, 2020 at 11:48 AM Oh second stanza is so deep.. Love it

Silent One May 10, 2020 at 10:16 AM Oh this is a deep one... Guess a lot of older people will relate to this one..

Beata Agustin May 10, 2020 at 6:50 AM Thanks for this, making me somehow nostalgic. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. Happy Mother's Day. God bless you.