Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

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Lune - Stones

too much work
piled up like flat stones
on hot sand

sun beats down
I cannot afford to add
one more stone

May 11, 2020 (visual number 2)
for nette onclaud's Flow With The Collum Lune Poetry Contest

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Beata Agustin May 15, 2020 at 6:31 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your comments. God bless you.

Sam Kauffman May 14, 2020 at 3:02 PM Too much on our plates well expressed my friend. Life can get overwhelming like a game of pickup sticks! Well said! Congratulations!

Richard Lamoureux May 14, 2020 at 7:17 AM The only one I have read that wasn’t the piano. Well done and congrats on your win.

Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2020 at 10:05 PM Congratulations, Andrea!

Mohan Chutani May 13, 2020 at 6:50 PM Congrats Andrea on a lovely take on pile of stones. Mohan

David Mohn May 13, 2020 at 6:13 PM Congratulations on your win Andrea...we were among the few to pick the stones image.

Paul Callus May 13, 2020 at 1:16 PM The last straw that breaks the camel's back...the cumulative effect of too much work! Artfully written Lune, Andrea. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

John Watt May 13, 2020 at 1:12 PM Nicely done Andrea - congratulations on your podium win!

Aditi Mishra May 13, 2020 at 12:10 PM I love the way you represented the weariness of adding onto the pile of thoughts using stones. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! :)

Rico Leffanta May 12, 2020 at 2:17 PM Hot stuff, isn't it? Aloha! Rico

Timothy Hicks May 12, 2020 at 12:53 PM I can almost see myself, tongue stuck out, putting on that last tiny little piece... enjoyed your take on it. As a side note .... I entered this lune contest, but for the life of me I can't recall how to add pictures to my text. Hmmm.. John Watt May 13, 2020 at 1:11 PM Timothy, I sent you a soup mail about copying images. Andrea taught it to me! ~ John

John Watt May 12, 2020 at 10:53 AM ooh, I feel the frustration in this one! Nice one - good luck in the contest Andrea Dietrich May 12, 2020 at 2:57 PM when I told you my head was spinning yesterday, I was just using an expression to show this feeling of being so frustrated!

Jan Allison May 12, 2020 at 7:58 AM go on I dare you !!:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit May 12, 2020 at 7:30 AM Flat stones on hot sand--I like the way associated them with too much work--and the ending lines speaks well to capture the photo. All the best, Andrea.

Mark Koplin May 12, 2020 at 6:05 AM Great work Andrea!!

Jenish Somadas May 12, 2020 at 4:01 AM Wonderful way your thoughts are wandering..Beautifully expressed..Good luck Andrea..

Kim Rodrigues May 11, 2020 at 11:31 PM You did a wonderful job with visual two! Love it!