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exculpate thee phantom altissimo thy moonlight opus score seduce her song § tarnished skeleton keys enthrall the scared little Lottie’s ebon rose duet 5/11/2020 FLOW WITH THE COLLUM LUNE Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Visual 1
*In a poem, Christine Daaé is referred to as Little Lottie in The Phantom of the Opera

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Date: 5/24/2020 7:28:00 AM
congratulations on your top win Kim...love the last line!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2020 1:07:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 5/14/2020 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim. Your words take the music of Phantom, and the relationships of the characters, to new heights.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 5/14/2020 5:25:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. This Phantom of the Opera adaptation makes sense to me. I never liked the original. Had to watch it three times a a theatre doctor on duty. Maybe I should have paid closer attention. Kind wishes, Kai
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 6:14:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kai!
Date: 5/14/2020 1:42:00 AM
Brilliant Kim. Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 6:14:00 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 5/13/2020 11:04:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Nette's contest. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 5/13/2020 6:51:00 PM
I can just hear those phantom chords Just as you describe them. Brilliant win. SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 8:00:00 PM
Thank you, Suzanne!
Date: 5/13/2020 6:41:00 PM
Wonderful, Kim. Congrats on this win. Mohan.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Mohan!
Date: 5/13/2020 6:05:00 PM
unique and wonderful Kim...congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 5/13/2020 1:48:00 PM
Kim, congrats on your top placement with your lovely musings ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 5/13/2020 1:21:00 PM
What a lovely, creative take on the old piano visual, Kim! Very deserving of placing first...Congratulations! // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/13/2020 12:04:00 PM
This is so different from all the others and truly poetic with the metaphors. Congratulations! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi!
Date: 5/12/2020 2:38:00 PM
what an awesome interpretation of the image, I saw phantom here it was an outstanding production:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2020 4:18:00 PM
Such a great show! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/12/2020 3:39:00 AM
Love your interpretation Kim, I'm sure Nette will too. Good luck Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!

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