Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Lune Opus

exculpate thee phantom
altissimo thy moonlight opus score
seduce her song

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tarnished skeleton keys
enthrall the scared little Lottie’s
ebon rose duet


5/11/2020
FLOW WITH THE COLLUM LUNE Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
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*In a poem, Christine Daaé is referred to
as Little Lottie in The Phantom of the Opera

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Jeanne Mcgee May 24, 2020 at 7:28 AM congratulations on your top win Kim...love the last line! Kim Rodrigues May 24, 2020 at 1:07 PM Thank you! :)

Sam Kauffman May 14, 2020 at 2:45 PM Congratulations on your win, Kim. Your words take the music of Phantom, and the relationships of the characters, to new heights. Kim Rodrigues May 14, 2020 at 3:52 PM Thank you, Sam!

Kai Michael Neumann May 14, 2020 at 5:25 AM Absolutely beautiful. This Phantom of the Opera adaptation makes sense to me. I never liked the original. Had to watch it three times a a theatre doctor on duty. Maybe I should have paid closer attention. Kind wishes, Kai Kim Rodrigues May 14, 2020 at 6:14 AM Thanks so much, Kai!

Caren Krutsinger May 14, 2020 at 1:42 AM Brilliant Kim. Congratulations on your win! Kim Rodrigues May 14, 2020 at 6:14 AM Thank you, sweet lady!

Eve Roper May 13, 2020 at 11:04 PM Kim, congratulations on your win in Nette's contest. Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues May 14, 2020 at 6:15 AM Thank you, Eve!

Suzanne Delaney May 13, 2020 at 6:51 PM I can just hear those phantom chords Just as you describe them. Brilliant win. SuZ Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2020 at 8:00 PM Thank you, Suzanne!

Mohan Chutani May 13, 2020 at 6:41 PM Wonderful, Kim. Congrats on this win. Mohan. Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2020 at 7:54 PM Thank you, Mohan!

David Mohn May 13, 2020 at 6:05 PM unique and wonderful Kim...congratulations! Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2020 at 7:54 PM Thank you, David!

John Watt May 13, 2020 at 1:48 PM Kim, congrats on your top placement with your lovely musings ~ John Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2020 at 2:48 PM Thank you, John!

Paul Callus May 13, 2020 at 1:21 PM What a lovely, creative take on the old piano visual, Kim! Very deserving of placing first...Congratulations! // paul Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2020 at 2:47 PM Thank you! Hugs...Kim

Aditi Mishra May 13, 2020 at 12:04 PM This is so different from all the others and truly poetic with the metaphors. Congratulations! :) Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2020 at 12:44 PM Thank you, Aditi!

Jan Allison May 12, 2020 at 2:38 PM what an awesome interpretation of the image, I saw phantom here it was an outstanding production:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues May 12, 2020 at 4:18 PM Such a great show! Hugs...Kim

Tom Cunningham May 12, 2020 at 3:39 AM Love your interpretation Kim, I'm sure Nette will too. Good luck Tom Kim Rodrigues May 12, 2020 at 6:44 AM Thank you, Tom!