Lune - Music

moved by music
there's an up and down
in every key...

...the puppeteer's ploy
"I play a mean, Human."
snickered the piano



Lune Contest
nette onclaud
Visual 1
May 12th. 2020

musicverse

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Line Gauthier

April 14, 2021 at 7:32 AM

Charming and clever, Timothy ~

Silent One

May 18, 2020 at 4:53 PM

Very clever... You have a bright mind

Suzanne Delaney

May 16, 2020 at 7:11 PM

An novel viewpoint and twist of words.Always a surprise in your poems. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

May 16, 2020 at 8:26 AM

This is better on giving it a second read. The human, “I want to be a real instrument!”

Connie Marcum Wong

May 14, 2020 at 2:18 AM

This is clever and cute Timothy. It brought a smile! Thank you. xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

May 13, 2020 at 11:47 AM

Wow Timothy - 'snickered the piano' - a definite win,so imaginative! Blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

May 12, 2020 at 5:47 PM

verrrry interesting, Timothy. Does it have an extra underlying meaning?

Justin Bordner

May 12, 2020 at 5:38 PM

Brilliant viewpoint Poet...how can One complain about being played so powerfully. Great choice with having the piano snicker, frickin awesome idea. A FAV! I thank you as well for your comments on my work, they are valuable to me...J.A.B.