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- Lune Haiku X 2 - Balance -

The body's balance   
  
                                      ~   well - being   ~

                                     Changes provides joy

                                               











01.07.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
5-3-5 Syllable
Lune Haiku is also known as the American Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 3:11 PM
The body is a work of art and so is your lovely Lune Haiku, Anne-Lise. Beautifully done! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Andresen Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 3:12 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:35 AM
They do!
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:38 AM
- Thank you Kim, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Talbot Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 4:44 PM
..............................life's in the balance.................... ..........................lest we change our ways......................... ..............................find total perfection................................. hugs Mick
Talbot Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 4:40 AM
Quote Anne-Lise “Lovely haiku, Mick :) - Thank you very much :) - Happy weeked :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)”, unquote. A senryu, I normally start such as a 'senryu comment', however, the effort in centralizing it caused me to forget, my apologies, and a big THANK YOU, for your kind words! With respect and a big summer HUG, Mick.
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 1:02 AM
- Lovely haiku, Mick :) - Thank you very much :) - Happy weeked :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 5:12 PM
The art of body! That brings rest and joy! A smart and lovely write dear Anne-Lise.. A joy to read.. stay safe and blessed always.
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 6:50 AM
- Thank you Besma, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 11:12 AM
I sort of remember when those sort of changes, brought me great joy... good one Anne-Lise...
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:05 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 1:12 PM
Indeed...
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 1:31 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Doll Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Wonderful! Enjoyed this very much, Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 1:30 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Health and fitness provide a happy outlook on life, Anne-Lise! Your Lune Haiku delivers a good dose of common sense:) Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 1:31 PM
- Thank you Paul, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 5:41 AM
Well crafted Anne-Lise..I feel the balance in your words.
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 1:55 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Just wow A-L
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 1:54 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:47 PM
so uplifting Anne Lise- welcome back we have missed you!:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:48 PM
- Feels good to be missed, many thanks Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:45 PM
A fit body will indeed bring a feeling of well being and joy, so often we eat the wrong food and do not exercise enough. Tom. Good luck Tom
Andresen Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:07 PM
- I've been on vacation and only eaten "wrong" food for 10 days ... :))) - It's time for some exercise :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:18 PM
the headstand pose so well defined in your verse, anne... wonderful!...huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:08 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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