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Lunch With the Girls

. "Listen first,.....to the voice in your head" Okay, …if only we can catch the waitress’s eye, we could order more tea… Can hardly believe it… Joan is still complaining about her in-laws Peg interrupts, excusing herself to go to the ladies room What was it she said about her husband burning breakfast? It must have been funny, since everyone is laughing… ---- My eyes wander to the window…. I see some geese in the sky Heading north... Oh my, summer has gone so quickly… I must get the family together and go out to the lake one more time We'll take a picnic, and let the children feed the geese... I'll remember to buy day-old bread just for that,... but we'll have to watch the children.. Last time one goose chased Suzanna, and she fell down, .... …made her cry,…poor thing It is so beautiful on the east shore….hopefully the water isn’t too cold Maybe the children can still enjoy a swim…yes…we must do that soon…. ---- Oops, Peg's back from the Ladies...... I'll scoot over, to make more room,..... Hmm..looks like she's done something different with her hair... Joan is still chattering about her weekend with the in-laws..... ---- How I long to be back at the lake again….on the beach in the sun…. Oh look there…just outside the window… a whirlwind is gathering up a few leaves Already rust and brown…edges curled with the touch of autumn Yes, ….summer has gone so quickly… .... .... .... .... .... .... For the Contest: Summer's End

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Date: 9/6/2011 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:27:00 PM
Carrie~ Congratulations on your terrific featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:36:00 AM
CONGRATS CARRIE ON YOUR FEATURED POEM THIS WEEK ON PS.. A FANTASTIC FIRST PLACE WIN TO SHARE WITH US ALL LUV..
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:43:00 AM
A First Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/2/2011 9:06:00 AM
another win~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~very proud to share the first place with such great poets.... ~~~smile~~~*-*jun-jun
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Date: 9/1/2011 10:28:00 PM
Carrie, Great to see a top win in your corner, Congratulations on first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/31/2011 1:02:00 AM
oh yes I remember this one. I was thinking it was this one, the quirky one. But quirky is often GOOD. Congrats,Carrie. everything you write is a winner!
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Date: 8/31/2011 12:08:00 AM
Oh, have I sat through the same lunches... well done. Congratulations on your first place win. Lee
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Date: 8/30/2011 7:09:00 PM
Interesting poem Carrie, thanks for sharing and congratulations on a great first place win.
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Date: 8/30/2011 5:57:00 PM
Wonderful poem!!!!!!!!!!!Congratulations on your win!!!!---Lori
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Date: 8/30/2011 5:39:00 PM
A real beauty Carrie.Congrats on this beautiful poem and thanks for the congrats on my win friend.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:14:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win with magnificent poetry luv.. honored to be sharing first with u..
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:40:00 PM
This is a beauty Carrie, I love how you gave your thoughts this beautiful and captivating voice that makes the reader part of the girls.. Congratulations on your win, love Wilma
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Date: 8/30/2011 1:33:00 PM
sparkling like champagne, carrie... enjoyed the charade of images.. roars of cheers to you for the grand win! :) huggs!
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your first place win this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:31:00 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Carrie. Awesome piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 8/30/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win Carrie. Enjoyed this write. Glad to see I'm not the only one who lets there mind wonder at times!! Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:55:00 AM
Carrie, big congrats, i love to see the Geese, we have a big wild fowl centre here and they are in their thousands, David
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Constance's "A Poem Please" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:56:00 PM
that was so interesting and different, Carrie. You and I chose the same theme, but said in very different way!
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