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Lunch Time Hurry

The day was bright as kids scurried all with fright. I was in the front leaping, jumping then soaring into the air! passing kids as I go by. I run at top speeds faster than a bullet I appear. I run and jumped into the air looking back at a fallen comrade with dis pear. I slip threw the gates before i'm caught slipping into the line for lunch with out any worry for I just avoided the lunch time hurry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2011 5:49:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 1/19/2011 3:38:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alex. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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