Lunch Hour Redemption

A mercury-free tin of tuna fish
  bolted down, gagging all the way
To the accompaniment of gossipy lips
  a revolting noon hour this hot day

A walk inside COVID's masked prison
  did not appeal to me either
Tossed the tin in the can with a certain elan
  Farewell, tuna fish; unleashed, my inner Tarzan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/11/2021 4:22:00 PM
G’day Gershon … ah well, you might need to eat a couple of cloves of garlic to help your breath - good one Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2021 5:06:00 PM
Gosh, I'm a one-clove-garlic man, Lindsay. Have been all my life. Think just one clove will clear out that tuna?! lol. Smiles, Gershon
Date: 2/10/2021 3:56:00 PM
I imagine your breath would be torture inside that mask. : )
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2021 5:47:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha! You hit the jackpot with that comment, Julie: My breath outside the mask is even more torture. lol. Thanks, gw
Date: 2/10/2021 12:34:00 PM
Ahhhh eee ahhh! Cute one Gershon. I can picture you swinging through the trees, tuna sandwich in one hand with a determined look on your face. Go get 'em. God Bless my friend, JB
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2021 5:44:00 PM
That must be some picture you drummed up there, Judy! I'm about as much of a Tarzan as Greta Thornberg is. Take care, Gershon
Date: 2/10/2021 12:07:00 PM
Mercury-free, but what about the plastic/plastique lunch bombed? Aloha! Rico
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2021 5:43:00 PM
Well, I guess I was one out of two on the environmental watch there, Rico. Thanks, gw
Date: 2/10/2021 11:12:00 AM
Well from now on I'll think of you as Tarzan because you tossed the tin in the can, with style and enthusiasm and bid the tuna fish farewell! You have pizzazz Mr. Wolf! Nice one my friend! Hugs and blessings,, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2021 5:42:00 PM
Ha, ha! Thanks for the enthusiasm, Jennifer. The fizz in my pizzaz could use a little carbonation boost. (though I suppose that's bad for the environment). Cheers, gw
Date: 2/10/2021 4:45:00 AM
Cute one. Love to you Gershon, Prayers, Gina
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2021 5:38:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Regina. Peace, Gershon
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