Purbasha Roy Poet Haiku

Lunch Box-Hc

Three pancakes mom gave
         
                 One I save ... your lunch box fell
   
                          Two fills my stomach


01/03/2019
A childhood incident ,when my friend was hungry in the lunch break.

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Eve Roper March 7, 2019 at 1:45 PM Congratulations on a great Haiku , Purbasha, :) . ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2019 at 4:34 AM - Congratulations on your win :) - Purbasha Roy March 7, 2019 at 4:36 AM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2019 at 3:17 PM Congrats for your win. Too bad you did not add the last two lines! Purbasha Roy March 6, 2019 at 6:50 PM Thank you!

Charles Messina March 6, 2019 at 1:34 PM Purbasha, You needed to add another line in the couplet so I had to place you at the bottom and it needed to rhyme with the first line. However it is a lovely poem. Congratulations on your placement. Charlie Purbasha Roy March 6, 2019 at 6:50 PM I admit,I didn't understand the rules well.Yet thank you Sir for the placement.

Charles Messina March 6, 2019 at 1:34 PM Purbasha, You needed to add another line in the couplet so I had to place you at the bottom and it needed to rhyme with the first line. However it is a lovely poem. Congratulations on your placement. Charlie