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Lunch

a bowl velvety carrot coconut curry lunch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/24/2012 2:47:00 PM
A loaf of bread, A jug of wine, And Thou Beside Me. Nice job here Ann It's a fine Haiku. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:45:00 AM
Yes ,this is a very good haiku.I think the cut is after 1st line?
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Ann Roske
Date: 2/21/2012 11:28:00 AM
Thank you for the comment - yes, you are correct the cut is after the first line. I'm working on my form and appreciate your noticing that.

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