Lunch

a bowl
velvety carrot coconut curry
lunch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 24, 2012 at 2:47 PM
A loaf of bread, A jug of wine, And Thou Beside Me. Nice job here Ann It's a fine Haiku. God Bless, JB
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February 21, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Yes ,this is a very good haiku.I think the cut is after 1st line?
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February 21, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Thank you for the comment - yes, you are correct the cut is after the first line. I'm working on my form and appreciate your noticing that.
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