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Lunar Muse

as a courtesy to a lady as she sets i rise though i am i am not her son but she is my moon we are both with the earth but she is other worldly

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Date: 9/9/2019 9:51:00 AM
I would change the last word to otherworldly.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/9/2019 7:38:00 PM
Thank you Richard. I totally agree with you, so go back and see if sure not I changed it. Thank you for your poetic advice Richard.

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