Lunar Muse

as a courtesy
to a lady
as she sets
i rise

though i am
i am not
her son
but she is

my moon
we are
both with
the earth

but
she is
other
worldly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 9:51 AM
I would change the last word to otherworldly.
Connelly Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 7:38 PM
Thank you Richard. I totally agree with you, so go back and see if sure not I changed it. Thank you for your poetic advice Richard.
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