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Lunacy of Light

Scream a blaze in passing fashion tear the velveteen tapestry of Luna’s anthracite passion rake nails of rainbow majesty on the depth of night’s travesty reveal, revel, shine in the dark leave lingering trace of lunacy for night, oh night, has not the lark. Contest: Hutain This One Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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John Freeman

Date: 12/8/2011 10:17:00 AM

Nice flowing words Deb. Congrats on your worthy poen win. Agape, Moses

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/8/2011 7:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win in the contest,dear friend.Have a nice day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2011 5:44:00 PM

what a cool Hutain, Debs. ME LIKES and congrats on your win.

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/7/2011 2:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in John's contest Debbie. Nicely written

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/4/2011 8:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2011 1:36:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Debbie

Jack Horne

Date: 8/4/2011 11:45:00 AM

Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 8/4/2011 2:21:00 AM

I really liked this one Deb. Many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2011 11:51:00 PM

Debs, yours is great. I really like it. Congratulations.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/3/2011 7:46:00 PM

Congratulations on the win..jag

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 5:43:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on an exciting win in Hutain contest with these amazing lines luv..

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/3/2011 3:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 7/27/2011 12:16:00 PM

Oie, this could be about Smokey, Debbie, but I think not!!:) A surge of "lunacy", prompted by the light of the moon? I truly do think that there can be a tug and pull during the full faced phase of the moon. I'm not sure about werewolves and vampires though. What's "Hutain" mean? Now I will leave this poem with the feeling of 'shoulda known'. Take care, be well, and stay fit enough to Kayak! Love, Mikki

Sidney Beck

Date: 7/27/2011 5:58:00 AM

Hey Debs. . . . . . .I is back on the soup....Ireland was good and rainy (as usual)..... . . .this poem should satisfy Nette's every desire. . . . it seems to be in her style if you don't mind me saying so. "Anthracite" passion?....wow that's really off the wall...she'll love it. . . . .good luck in the contest.. . I am entering but I stillgotta figure what the hell a hutain really is.....I have also entered your PLAY BALL contest....best wishes

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/26/2011 1:28:00 PM

My favorite line here? "Rake nails of rainbow majesty" I could just picture that soo vividly! Way to go-- this write sure jumps out at me, so alive-- I bet Nette loves this one!

James Peranteau

Date: 7/26/2011 11:11:00 AM

Awesome verse Debbie ! I just love the way you just fly with these writes of yours, with strick attention to your vission, awesome ! Have a good one....much love, james