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Lunacy of Light

Scream a blaze in passing fashion tear the velveteen tapestry of Luna’s anthracite passion rake nails of rainbow majesty on the depth of night’s travesty reveal, revel, shine in the dark leave lingering trace of lunacy for night, oh night, has not the lark. Contest: Hutain This One Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 12/8/2011 10:17:00 AM
Nice flowing words Deb. Congrats on your worthy poen win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/8/2011 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in the contest,dear friend.Have a nice day!
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Date: 12/7/2011 5:44:00 PM
what a cool Hutain, Debs. ME LIKES and congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/7/2011 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Debbie. Nicely written
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Date: 12/7/2011 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Debbie
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:45:00 AM
Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2011 2:21:00 AM
I really liked this one Deb. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:51:00 PM
Debs, yours is great. I really like it. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on the win..jag
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Date: 8/3/2011 5:43:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on an exciting win in Hutain contest with these amazing lines luv..
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Date: 8/3/2011 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:16:00 PM
Oie, this could be about Smokey, Debbie, but I think not!!:) A surge of "lunacy", prompted by the light of the moon? I truly do think that there can be a tug and pull during the full faced phase of the moon. I'm not sure about werewolves and vampires though. What's "Hutain" mean? Now I will leave this poem with the feeling of 'shoulda known'. Take care, be well, and stay fit enough to Kayak! Love, Mikki
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Date: 7/27/2011 5:58:00 AM
Hey Debs. . . . . . .I is back on the soup....Ireland was good and rainy (as usual)..... . . .this poem should satisfy Nette's every desire. . . . it seems to be in her style if you don't mind me saying so. "Anthracite" passion?....wow that's really off the wall...she'll love it. . . . .good luck in the contest.. . I am entering but I stillgotta figure what the hell a hutain really is.....I have also entered your PLAY BALL contest....best wishes
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:28:00 PM
My favorite line here? "Rake nails of rainbow majesty" I could just picture that soo vividly! Way to go-- this write sure jumps out at me, so alive-- I bet Nette loves this one!
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Date: 7/26/2011 11:11:00 AM
Awesome verse Debbie ! I just love the way you just fly with these writes of yours, with strick attention to your vission, awesome ! Have a good one....much love, james
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