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Luminous Love

Important is how he makes me feel night and day with every word spoken, he takes my breath away. Day by day, I walk through the halls Every step I take I miss him and put up my defensive walls. Drowing out the crowd Smiling to myself, suddenly so proud. I'm thinking of you, your gorgeous eyes of luminous blue and how you make me smile. I miss you, haven't seen you in awhile. But you're always on my mind. Thinking about how our love is so intertwined. I get wrapped up in thoughts of you but now you're gone, and I don't know what to do. My smile vanishs, the tears slowly fall. and all I'm doing now, is just waiting for you to call.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/12/2010 10:53:00 AM
awesome poem.
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Date: 2/12/2009 9:46:00 AM
awe, how sweet. I like the last two lines, 'all I'm doing now, is just waiting for you to call. actually I've always liked the lines, 'he takes my breath away'...good write
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Date: 2/4/2009 8:59:00 AM
omg. . i can relate to this one to. . .great write!!!
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Date: 2/3/2009 9:07:00 AM
I put so much feeling into this poem..Like I said, I miss Josh so much!! :)
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Date: 2/2/2009 8:57:00 AM
wow passionate! nicely done...serenity get on chat will ya? love Maryam*
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