Luminous Love

Important is how he makes me feel
night and day
with every word spoken,
he takes my breath away.
Day by day,
I walk through the halls
Every step I take I miss him
and put up my defensive walls.
Drowing out the crowd
Smiling to myself,
suddenly so proud.
I'm thinking of you,
your gorgeous eyes of luminous blue
and how you make me smile.
I miss you,
haven't seen you in awhile.
But you're always on my mind.
Thinking about how our love
is so intertwined.
I get wrapped up in thoughts of you
but now you're gone, 
and I don't know what to do.
My smile vanishs, the tears slowly fall.
and all I'm doing now,
is just waiting for you to call.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 10:53 AM
awesome poem.
Parish Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 9:46 AM
awe, how sweet. I like the last two lines, 'all I'm doing now, is just waiting for you to call. actually I've always liked the lines, 'he takes my breath away'...good write
Wiggins Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 8:59 AM
omg. . i can relate to this one to. . .great write!!!
Montgomery Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 9:07 AM
I put so much feeling into this poem..Like I said, I miss Josh so much!! :)
Haniff Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 8:57 AM
wow passionate! nicely done...serenity get on chat will ya? love Maryam*
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