Luminous Beings

Be meek, Be mild
words intended
the luminous Being to beguile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 6, 2014 at 4:43 PM
John, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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January 6, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Thank you Anne and Linda. I listed it as , Senryu: Short Japanese style poem, similar to haiku in structure, however, senryû tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Again, thank you for the warm welcome to this forum.
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January 6, 2014 at 3:23 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, John ! - Lovely haiku - well written ! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 6, 2014 at 11:22 AM
Thank you Anne and. I should have listed it as , Senryu: Short Japanese style poem, similar to haiku in structure, however, senryû tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Again, thank you for the warm welcome to this forum.
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January 5, 2014 at 8:35 PM
John, ooo I love the charming imagery, really draws in the ready. Beautiful for a haiku.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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January 6, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Anne. I should have listed it as, Senryu: Short Japanese style poem, similar to haiku in structure, however, senryû tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Again, thank you for the warm welcome to this forum.
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