Luminance

Luminance

      Life's lessons lurk in
   Labyrinthic lanes of mind;
 Light  the lamp within

Contest Vernal 2017 standard contest 
Any theme any three lines
Date Mar 26 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Daniel Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Illuminating Senyru indeed, Sushma, love the alliteration:)
Singh Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Thanks, Jo!
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 3:47 PM
Cool alliteration in your senryu, Sushma
Singh Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Singh Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
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