Kim Merryman Poet Cinquain

Lullabye

Whisper 
Soft lullabies
A mother's melody
Soothingly shushes fretful cries
Precious.

                                                         
         
Kim Merryman
For  nette onclaud's  Melody of Cinquain contest   2nd place win
9/8/11      

For PD's 2nd place winners contest

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Daver Austin June 3, 2015 at 4:11 PM Precious feelings indeed. Loved it. Congrats on the selection. daver Kim Merryman June 5, 2015 at 12:19 PM Thank you, Daver!

Skat A June 2, 2015 at 11:13 PM Kim, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love Kim Merryman June 5, 2015 at 12:19 PM Thank you, Skat!

Sara Kendrick March 8, 2012 at 2:06 PM Congrats on your win with this excellent work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A March 7, 2012 at 10:19 AM KIM..... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Carol Sunshine Brown March 7, 2012 at 7:26 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2012 at 7:23 PM congrats Kim on a wonderful win for this creative write.. so much feeling in the lines penned luv..

Debbie Guzzi March 6, 2012 at 6:10 PM such a clear picture in such a few words! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico March 6, 2012 at 6:10 PM Great write Kim !! So enjoyed. Always hugs Michael

Olusegun Arowolo March 6, 2012 at 4:42 PM Nice write,Kim.Congratulations on your win in PD`s contest.....And thanks for stopping by to comment on my poems...

Dr.Ram Mehta September 12, 2011 at 8:54 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 9:07 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Melody Of Cinquain" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi September 11, 2011 at 5:46 PM yes..nothing like Mama's voice! congrad's light & love

Kash Poet September 11, 2011 at 4:01 PM Lovely Cinquain...Congrats Kim on your win.

Sara Kendrick September 11, 2011 at 2:57 PM Speaks of mother's love..Congrats..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 11, 2011 at 2:18 PM This Lovely!!!!!! Congratulations on your well-deserved win!!!!!!!!!Lori

Nancy Jones September 11, 2011 at 1:49 PM so so sweet! congrats, Kim! ~N

David Williams September 11, 2011 at 3:33 AM hey Kim congrats on your great win..David

Margaret Foster September 10, 2011 at 11:27 PM Congratulations Kim. Gentle and sweet, precious indeed. cheers Marg.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 10, 2011 at 11:13 PM Congrats Kim on super second place win with this brilliant beauty..knew it upon first read luv..

Lee Ramage September 10, 2011 at 9:18 PM I'll say! Well done and congratulations on your win. Really nice. Lee

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2011 at 10:41 PM this is indeed precious. And unlike me, it looks like you were able to satisfy the modern cinquain criteria with yours . A SURE fire win!!

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2011 at 10:41 PM ps. also your alliteration in this one was astounding.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 9, 2011 at 3:05 PM Thank you for a most enjoyable read today Kim. Hey the weekend is here now go enjoy yourself and keep that pen flowing with the new inspiration you will find along the way. That is what I have set in my mind to do. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2011 at 2:38 PM Enjoyed reading this one..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2011 at 11:48 AM sweetly penned Kim and being a Mom of five sons I can so relate to the many lullabys sung over the years.. lovely words ..good luck in the contest ..luv..

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