Lullabye

Whisper Soft lullabies A mother's melody Soothingly shushes fretful cries Precious. Kim Merryman For nette onclaud's Melody of Cinquain contest 2nd place win 9/8/11 For PD's 2nd place winners contest

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Daver Austin

Date: 6/3/2015 4:11:00 PM

Precious feelings indeed. Loved it. Congrats on the selection. daver

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/5/2015 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Daver!

Skat A

Date: 6/2/2015 11:13:00 PM

Kim, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/5/2015 12:19:00 PM

Thank you, Skat!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2012 2:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this excellent work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/7/2012 10:19:00 AM

KIM..... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2012 7:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2012 7:23:00 PM

congrats Kim on a wonderful win for this creative write.. so much feeling in the lines penned luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/6/2012 6:10:00 PM

such a clear picture in such a few words! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/6/2012 6:10:00 PM

Great write Kim !! So enjoyed. Always hugs Michael

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/6/2012 4:42:00 PM

Nice write,Kim.Congratulations on your win in PD`s contest.....And thanks for stopping by to comment on my poems...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/12/2011 8:54:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 9:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Melody Of Cinquain" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/11/2011 5:46:00 PM

yes..nothing like Mama's voice! congrad's light & love

Kash Poet

Date: 9/11/2011 4:01:00 PM

Lovely Cinquain...Congrats Kim on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2011 2:57:00 PM

Speaks of mother's love..Congrats..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/11/2011 2:18:00 PM

This Lovely!!!!!! Congratulations on your well-deserved win!!!!!!!!!Lori

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/11/2011 1:49:00 PM

so so sweet! congrats, Kim! ~N

David Williams

Date: 9/11/2011 3:33:00 AM

hey Kim congrats on your great win..David

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/10/2011 11:27:00 PM

Congratulations Kim. Gentle and sweet, precious indeed. cheers Marg.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2011 11:13:00 PM

Congrats Kim on super second place win with this brilliant beauty..knew it upon first read luv..

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/10/2011 9:18:00 PM

I'll say! Well done and congratulations on your win. Really nice. Lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 10:41:00 PM

this is indeed precious. And unlike me, it looks like you were able to satisfy the modern cinquain criteria with yours . A SURE fire win!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 10:41:00 PM

ps. also your alliteration in this one was astounding.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2011 3:05:00 PM

Thank you for a most enjoyable read today Kim. Hey the weekend is here now go enjoy yourself and keep that pen flowing with the new inspiration you will find along the way. That is what I have set in my mind to do. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2011 2:38:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2011 11:48:00 AM

sweetly penned Kim and being a Mom of five sons I can so relate to the many lullabys sung over the years.. lovely words ..good luck in the contest ..luv..