Lucky 8

LUCKY-8
                 
             I started to adore her in a coaching class of eight.
               Overwhelmed with her pultrichude in elegance.
                Her charisma charmed me just on first glance.
                 Blazing beauty as paragon almost perfect right.
                 She was in discomfort keeping herself apart.
               She was a lesbian, fact flashed on revelation.
              For boys, she had never felt any attraction.
            But still I can’t forget, she stole my heart.

  07/11/18
 
'Rhyme Time 5' Lucky-8 contest by Laura Loo 
                                           
Second Place                                                              

August 2018 Premiere Contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 2:24 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Gentry Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 6:17 AM
Very nice. Good luck, Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 6:24 AM
Thanks Caren for visit
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