Luckier

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"LUCKIER" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Luckier the departed souls are than the living who left behind to grieve!* © Demetrios Trifiatis 23 February 2018 *Inspired by Victor Buhagiar's poem: " In Memoriam: Chiselled in My Heart "

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/25/2018 9:26:00 PM

For they are sad no more. So we should but struggle to free ourselves from grief, it rocks us. Hello and I enjoyed your write and the pop of the flowers when first the page was blossoming on my screen. It was perfect. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/23/2018 8:14:00 AM

True. xomo <3

Silent One

Date: 2/23/2018 6:42:00 AM

You make a valid point, another great tribute to our friend Victor..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/23/2018 5:32:00 AM

Another truth, my friend. We find relief when we grieve.

Maria Williams

Date: 2/23/2018 5:27:00 AM

I think we grieve for ourselves not them,I for one know that I do. We know that they've gone to a happy place. Demetrios as always your insightful thoughts are so refreshing my dearest friend. Keep them coming, you inspire so many....Maria xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/23/2018 2:50:00 AM

Demetrios. So true, because of your intense love for them sometimes the grief can be overwhelming. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/23/2018 2:40:00 AM

- So true, in deep sadness existence feels meaningless - Excellent written, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor

Date: 2/23/2018 1:33:00 AM

So true Demetrios. Thoughtful piece. Clever deduction...