Luck

Let me escape from you one last time...
so I could feel the sensation
get the feeling of the risk
rush; no hesitation
just hit the bottom
and then get up
to see you
and touch
luck
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 7, 2010 at 1:43 AM
~ Smile, "Yes," as I reread this amazing poe again, dear, it seemed to somehow feel my heart with joy; just knowing ~ It is soo beautiful to love and be loved!!! ~ "Spellbinding Amid Loves Wonderous Dreams" ~ "My Purest Love to 'You' &, Ten Times Refined, 'Forevermore,'" John! ~ "Have The Most Beautiful of Beautiful of Beautiful, Nights, 'Beautiful Jessica;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~
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August 7, 2010 at 1:35 AM
Smile! ~ "Yes," its almost surely seems as though it would be....You know they say, that not even death can sever a true and pure born love ~ Smile, do "You" believe that dear? ~ "Your Verse, 'Beautiful Jessica Arteaga," is starting to seep inside of me; and only "One Other," has Ever done that to myself before....Its truly "Beautiful to Find, 'These Rare Diamonds Amid The Sky,'" of ones beating and pulsing, deepest heart ~ ....Cont:)
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