Luck

Let me escape from you one last time... so I could feel the sensation get the feeling of the risk rush; no hesitation just hit the bottom and then get up to see you and touch luck

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John Rhinem

Date: 8/7/2010 1:43:00 AM

~ Smile, "Yes," as I reread this amazing poe again, dear, it seemed to somehow feel my heart with joy; just knowing ~ It is soo beautiful to love and be loved!!! ~ "Spellbinding Amid Loves Wonderous Dreams" ~ "My Purest Love to 'You' &, Ten Times Refined, 'Forevermore,'" John! ~ "Have The Most Beautiful of Beautiful of Beautiful, Nights, 'Beautiful Jessica;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/7/2010 1:35:00 AM

Smile! ~ "Yes," its almost surely seems as though it would be....You know they say, that not even death can sever a true and pure born love ~ Smile, do "You" believe that dear? ~ "Your Verse, 'Beautiful Jessica Arteaga," is starting to seep inside of me; and only "One Other," has Ever done that to myself before....Its truly "Beautiful to Find, 'These Rare Diamonds Amid The Sky,'" of ones beating and pulsing, deepest heart ~ ....Cont:)