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Lucid Dreams

The sun crept down on a waveless lake, The phantoms slithered among the trees, I search and I search with every breath I can take, Wolves howl down this is not a place for me, Camphor burns thin casting a shadowed filled fate, Ravens flock in shock and flee, Illuminated eyes waiting for my wake, Another endless night in void bound journey. (2017)

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/7/2017 8:07:00 PM

This is a captivating write Corwin! Fantastic imagery and scary. Well done my friend!! Awesome! :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/9/2017 7:20:00 PM

I go back and re-read my poems all the time Corwin. Sometimes I see things that I can edit to make it better that I didn't see before. I'm always tweaking mine... It takes a lot of tweaks (even after I post them on PS) before I feel as if they are finished, and sometimes i never quite feel like they are... :)

Corwin Donovan
Date: 9/8/2017 12:10:00 AM

Thank you Susan you are a good friend. I never go back and read my poems so its good to know they can still hold up: ^)

Funom Makama

Date: 7/29/2017 10:42:00 AM

What a great poem. Welcome to poetry soup

Corwin Donovan
Date: 7/29/2017 1:13:00 PM

Thank you very much. Im glad you liked it.