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I have a book talk today. My first one! 

LUCID

Liquid lusts to drown…breathe
               Lengthy practicing...calm

       Loving friends listening
Lord…I pray a good show

                    Lucidity of dance
                Larynx clarified…smooth

     Long-suffering reaps fruit

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Date: 4/18/2017 9:02:00 AM
Beautifully written Kim. Your poetry is always so creative and I can see the thought that goes into each piece you write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2017 9:24:00 AM
I appreciate that so, Chris!
Date: 4/18/2017 8:58:00 AM
Nice seven sisters ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks, Probir!
Date: 4/18/2017 8:07:00 AM
Practice makes perfect..Nice pleiades Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2017 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!

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