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I have a book talk today. My first one! 

Lucid

LUCID

Liquid lusts to drown…breathe
               Lengthy practicing...calm

       Loving friends listening
Lord…I pray a good show

                    Lucidity of dance
                Larynx clarified…smooth

     Long-suffering reaps fruit

Kim Rodrigues © 2017
Pleiades Form
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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April 18, 2017 at 9:02 AM
Beautifully written Kim. Your poetry is always so creative and I can see the thought that goes into each piece you write.
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April 18, 2017 at 9:24 AM
I appreciate that so, Chris!
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April 18, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Nice seven sisters ...
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April 18, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thanks, Probir!
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April 18, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Practice makes perfect..Nice pleiades Kim
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April 18, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
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