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Lucid Most of it is blurry, For that, I am grateful. Waking in a hurry, From those eyes so hateful. Chatting with my mother, The day bright and beaming, Just like any other, Except I was dreaming. Somehow I realized, That I wasn't conscious, That was when in her eyes, I saw something monstrous. Everything around me, Stood completely still, Save for those fiery, Eyes that craved to kill. Burning coals through my soul, Embers that overwhelm, In those cold, empty holes, I witnessed my true Hell. It was like I'd summoned Something so abysmal, That it's eyes could bludgeon, Leaving my soul dismal. I panicked and I scurried, About the frozen scene, Never more so hurried, To flee from a dream. Luckily I awoke, To a cold December, Before that Demon spoke, Something I'd remember.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/6/2016 12:16:00 AM
Hi Bo, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Bo Vigoren
Date: 1/6/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you! !
Date: 1/5/2016 4:21:00 PM
well done on the imagery, Bo. Reading how this was a dream, makes it even a better read. Enjoyed the epic poem. SKAT
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Bo Vigoren
Date: 1/6/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thank you very kindly!

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